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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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True love at last < !signature-->Almost unbelievable Mirror image of My parents love Always and forever. Love came Out of no where Very suddenly Everything just Slipped into place. Just in case U forgot what I Said, I want you To know that I will love you forever Never to stop. ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 11-12-2000).] |
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Yankee10n20BFF Junior Member
since 2000-11-02
Posts 27T-Town, AL |
Great poem! I hope you showed this to your b-friend. Seems like you are really in love! Yankee No matter what you are going through, all you have to do is close your eyes and dream cause no one can take them away from you. |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
WHATS THE TITLE? HMMMM I DONT KNOW IM CONFUSED BUT ALL WELL, GOOD POEM I THINK THE POEM IS LOVE AT LAST HUH WELL DONT LAUGH AT ME LAUGH WITH ME OKAY? LOL "put the name of the person u love, not in a heart because they alway break but put it in a circle which last forever" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great poem eternal love.....a wonderful thing to relish upon!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Heh...I thought the title was rather obvious...any guesses? ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
The title would be Tamma Loves Justin. You did a really great job with this, the flow of it was great considering you already knew the first letters  Did I just give it all away? Nicely done!"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Yup Lakewalker...Ya gave it away...I thought I did when I kept ending itself and my own reply with: ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I loved this poem Tamma...Did you ever hear the quote "You never know exactly when love begins, but u always know exactly when it ends?"...i think that fits in nicely with this part.. Love came Out of no where Very suddenly Everything just Slipped into place. Anyway...great job hun! Im glad that you too have eachother to make you so happy! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Tamma~ I like this one!!!It is really creative...I think that the title is so obvious...Good work!!! I have tried to write a poem like this but I could never finish it...With mine and my boyfriends name... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
You are one good writer! This poem was really moving. Yeah...I sure hope you showed this your B/F cause even though a lot of guys don't like to show emotion...I know reading this would make him feel pretty good! Keep writing! |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Thanks for the comments  2 Months Today!!! ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Congratulations! I'm so happy for you, your poem was great, but I'm so happy, 2 months, that seems forever! Well, I hope everything keeps going great with you and Justin, and I hope you keep writting this excellent poems. Bye, and good luck, Your friend, Caz It's been raining since you left me. |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Thanks Caz!! Every day we seem to get closer And everytime he lies his head in my lap I fall even more in love with My Tall, Skinny Justin. ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ ~*~ Gidget -N- Shorty ~*~ If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
I guess it dosn't hurt to say it one more time... Good Job!!! As most ppl have already pointed out, this poem would not have been easy for most to wirte, but you did a good job. Nice rythem, and the theme is very strong. look forward to more posts from you. "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ "I am, who I am and what you think, I don't give a damn" Chilli Peppers |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Thanx Isgona!! Things are going great...hes the best!!! ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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