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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Careful what you say, careful what you see. Beware of what may happen, or you will surely lose me. You say you will You say you won't. I'm never for sure if you do or don't. It's all in fun it's all in play. Careful what you do, careful what you say. "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Are you threating me???-corholeo Good poem chic early to rise, early to bed, make a man healthy, But socially dead-Dot animantics. but socially dead. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice poem, very simple and i liked it  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This really gets your point out, I like it how it's written. Good poem  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Thanks guys!!! jytree-I dunno...maybe "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Very cool poem hun...i liked it! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
isn't life just plain confusing? People are too.....maybe you're searching for the answer in the wrong place.......thank and keep sharing oh yeah, why do you hurt so much? i though i was the only one....i just posted one about how much i hurt, lately..like 5 days ago, i think u might like it if you read it I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
And here I was thinking I was the only one (well, me and the people in Sarajevo), but anyway I guess you could say that my life it that of a flower, there are those that say I'm pretty and then there's those who step on me for pleasure. But I can't just come out and tell them to stop, so I deal with it and while it is boiling inside me, I write poetry about it so that I don't go past the boiling point. If that makes any sense at all. "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
I like how the poem was written playfully at the same time there is a sence of bitterness or resentment tward some one. Very nicely written. IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ |
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