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Stephanya
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since 2000-11-03
Posts 63
Berkshire County~USA~

0 posted 2000-11-12 03:29 AM


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I'm totally flustered, I can't even come up with a title right now. Perhaps if this never happened, I wouldn't even have had to write this.
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i told myself not to do it
not to give in and talk to you
there's a reason behind this bit
but i'm afraid of who will win this feud
maybe i just screwed up
no one can tell the future
but really who was dumped
i'm going to let this course run its own path now
what happens, will happen
i just can't ever explain how
why can't we be like we were then
i don't want to lose in the end
if you could just read my mind
*im always going to want you more than just a friend*
and everything would be just fine
i hate being this sad
i cant stand this huge shove
and i definitely hate seeing you mad
i just wanted to be your first love
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i just want to thank you though  
thank you for opening my eyes
and showing me that even after my hearts been broken
it can be repaired by someone else
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thanks for coming here tonight
thanks for entering my life
"im sorry you didnt enjoy your stay "
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I Love You & Goodnight Droop...
11-12-2000
3:20 am
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(:***stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."
::

© Copyright 2000 Stephani B.-01201 - All Rights Reserved
Stephanya
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since 2000-11-03
Posts 63
Berkshire County~USA~
1 posted 2000-11-12 12:17 PM


WOW! Is this that bad where NO ONE wants to reply????
Put it this way, my boy-friend refuses to sepnd any time with me lately, so last i said come with me or that's it.I got nothing, but a run-around. So I said whatever, and I'm trying to stick to my guns, but I'm too weak. I'm trying to let it go, and see if it comes back pretty much, but I'm really scared that I might lose him...


(:***stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

..

Child of the Stars
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2 posted 2000-11-12 03:38 PM



  Hey, this was a great poem!! I really don't get why no one replied. As for your bf, I can't give advice..It's always bad. Just remember that everything happens for a reason.. Keep writing..

   ~Carly

A word is dead
When it is said
Some say,
I say it just
Begins to live
That day.

curlygurly
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since 2000-09-12
Posts 276
USA
3 posted 2000-11-12 04:20 PM


WOW that was really good. if he hurt you then he's not worthy, and you only learn it the hard way. there is no such thing as being friends after a relationship, it always feels funny.  
Curly


"So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside"
-Lenny Kravitz


Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2000-11-12 05:41 PM


This was a great poem! I hope all turns out well!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Stephanya
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since 2000-11-03
Posts 63
Berkshire County~USA~
5 posted 2000-11-12 06:15 PM


So wait, Curly, you're trying to tell me that MY own Quote, my own personal experiences, can't happen? Girl, that's you're life, and the way you feel. It's your own OPINION. So mention that next time.

(:***stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

..

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
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6 posted 2000-11-12 06:52 PM


I guess to me whenever someone posts something it's obviously going to be their opinion.  I think this poem was good, and I don't have any advice on this situation, I don't know what I would do!  But good poem

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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