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Love Denied
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Love Denied |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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Love Denied: Your lips, sweet lips That I have kissed. Sweet as honey dew, And soft as silk. Under the moon shine. Our stand still love line. Your lovely touch, gentle grace Trembling my body forever more. A soul, your soul I see. Murmur of truth, love me! I gaze upon shivering shadow move. Wisked away from unrequited love.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"A soul, your soul I see. Murmur of truth, love me!" "Wisked away from unrequited love." Tender sentiments from you in this lovely verse Javier, its sets a very gentle and wistful mood, nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Dopey, very very very good job on this one. The feelings in it seemed so sincere, good job on the poem! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Most impressive! I didn't know you had a sappy side.........j/k. I like it, dude. *~Meredith~* I'll just keep on laughing, Hiding the tears in my eyes... *Oleander |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I'm glad you liked it and all but i think this sappy, love poem deserves some more posts haha.....hardly ever do i write things like this. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
yeah, i looked at the title and was like WHOA! Dopey hardly ever writes poems that have really much love in them lol but hey dope this is pretty damn good. And thanks for the reply on my poem your always the one to help "put the name of the person u love, not in a heart because they alway break but put it in a circle which last forever" |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. Sniff sniff..so good, so good... ~Carly A word is dead When it is said Some say, I say it just Begins to live That day. |
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