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Moving on.... |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
I'm moving on and hoping your not hurting to much It's time, I have crushes and people who like me. I'll never forget The 1st hug The 1st kiss The 1st time I held you and felt loved. Please don't cry Please don't forget me Please always remember I'll be here. If I go out with someone else don't get hurt you'll always be my 1st love. How can I forget you your sweet, I hope we'll be best friends. I'll never forget the time "Dave will you go out with me?" "Sure Minna" from that moment I felt so loved even though it didn't work out we made it for a year. Thank you for always being there making my days brighter I'll miss everything that happend; between us. Remember never forget I love you your a great person that I'll never forget you.. ~*~Minna~*~  Wishing I could walk, Wishing I could have a guy but will those come true? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this was a great little poem/letter you should give this to the person you wrote it too......  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
hi dopey_dope...I gave it to him, he said I write wonderful. I am looking into the writing feild for collage, I love to write. ~*~PG~*~Wishing I could walk, Wishing I could have a guy but will those come true? |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This was a good poem, thanks for sharing it with us! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Wait a minute here, this is not the same football guy you were talking about in the other poem now is it? Well, maybe not. It's good that you two are still friends no matter what. It's really nice to see that. thanks for sharing this wonderful read I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
This was sad but it ended really good...I love the ending...Having a broken heart is something that is hard to deal with...But eventually it will heal... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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