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~*~PrettyGirly~*~
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since 2000-11-04
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Fitchburg Ma Usa

0 posted 2000-11-11 11:10 PM


I'm moving on and hoping your not hurting to much
It's time,
I have crushes and people who like me.

I'll never forget
The 1st hug
The 1st kiss
The 1st time I held you and felt loved.

Please don't cry
Please don't forget me
Please always remember I'll be here.

If I go out with someone else
don't get hurt
you'll always be my 1st love.

How can I forget you
your sweet,
I hope we'll be best friends.

I'll never forget the time
"Dave will you go out with me?"
"Sure Minna"
from that moment I felt so loved
even though it didn't work out
we made it for a year.

Thank you for always being there
making my days brighter
I'll miss everything that happend;
between us.

Remember never forget
I love you
your a great person
that I'll never forget you..
~*~Minna~*~  




Wishing I could walk, Wishing I could have a guy but will those come true?


© Copyright 2000 Minna Talviharju - All Rights Reserved
Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2000-11-11 11:40 PM


Hey this was a great little poem/letter
you should give this to the person you wrote it too......



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


~*~PrettyGirly~*~
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since 2000-11-04
Posts 83
Fitchburg Ma Usa
2 posted 2000-11-12 12:07 PM


hi dopey_dope...I gave it to him, he said I write wonderful. I am looking into the writing feild for collage, I love to write.   ~*~PG~*~

Wishing I could walk, Wishing I could have a guy but will those come true?


Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
3 posted 2000-11-12 01:29 PM


This was a good poem, thanks for sharing it with us!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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Acies
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4 posted 2000-11-13 05:06 PM


Wait a minute here, this is not the same football guy you were talking about in the other poem now is it?  Well, maybe not.  It's good that you two are still friends no matter what.  It's really nice to see that.  thanks for sharing this wonderful read

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
5 posted 2000-11-13 05:09 PM


This was sad but it ended really good...I love the ending...Having a broken heart is something that is hard to deal with...But eventually it will heal...

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

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