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A crush |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
I have a crush on you, I came to see you play football you play great I want to become more than friends I saw you and you smiled and said "HI" my friends said "hey Marcus" I said "hey". You look so cute I talk to you online but you don't talk back I want to go out with you all my friends said I should go with you I'm waiting for my phone to ring. I like everything about you when we were in the 8th grade we hung out and I'd be smiling one day I said I'm going to another school Marcus you were sad. I remember everything about you we had our different crews we had the same class we had a really good friendship when I left I herd you were sad I told you we'd be best friends for ever. Tonight when you started talking to me I smiled and knew our friendship was back but I want more than that friendship.. I have a crush on you............ ~*~Minna~*~ Wishing I could walk, Wishing I could have a guy but will those come true? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
i like the style in this poem. A very simplistic style in which you express yourself well in. GReat job! GOOD LUCK!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Well you know everyone's just going to tell you to tell him! Very well expressed thoughts here, the poem is good  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I think that you should just come out and tell him how you feel...Then maybe he wont be a crush anymore...He could be your bf...Anyways keep up the good work!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Lakewalker's right cause that is exactly what I'm about to tell you. Go tell him how you feel. Not now though. As you said, you guys just started talking again or what. Take it slowly, but remember now, there is nothing wrong if the girl makes the first move  so, good luckI see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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