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Nikkisweet
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since 2000-02-14
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Tx, Dallas

0 posted 2000-11-11 06:44 PM



Today is the day
To celebrate and play
The house is full
And there are people sitting on every stool
People are dancing to the music's beat
While the hosts are preparing our food to eat
Finally the food is done
And into the kitchen we do run
There's turkey, stuffing, gray, and ham
Also sweet potatoes, bread, and jam
While we eat the deviled eggs
My dog stands at our feet and begs
For drinks we have soda, water, and tea
Which makes everyone have to go pee (hehe)
Now that the eating part is done
It's time for some fun
Everyone all sits on the couch
And because they're so full, they have to slouch
The T.V. screen shows a football game
Which all the women think is lame
Afterwards, it's time to say good-bye
And everyone leaves with a happy sigh



~Guys are like stars,
there are millions
of them, but only
one can make you dreams
come true~

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Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2000-11-11 06:50 PM


STUFFING!

I love thanksgiving.....or as I call it..... TURKEY DAY!!!!!

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMmmmmmmmmm!!!!!
Wonderful poem..
and once again..........

STUFFING!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


curlygurly
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since 2000-09-12
Posts 276
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2 posted 2000-11-11 08:56 PM


Great representation of thanksgiving. it's pretty much true, well except for my thanksgiving this year. oh it's gonna suck. i especially liked the part about how women think football games are lame. they're only fun to me if i go to my school's football games, they're always fun.  
Curly


"So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside"
-Lenny Kravitz


Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
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3 posted 2000-11-12 01:19 PM


Hey,
This was really good, I found the pee part a little too amusing, but good job

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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4 posted 2000-11-13 04:59 PM


This poem put a big smile on my face.  This is totally amazing Nikki    specially, the pee part   he he he...the only thing though, what's wrong with football?  

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Erin
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since 2000-06-15
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5 posted 2000-11-13 05:00 PM


Good one!!!This was really creative...And you are making me really hungry...My tummy is having a conversation with me now...

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

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