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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
Today is the day To celebrate and play The house is full And there are people sitting on every stool People are dancing to the music's beat While the hosts are preparing our food to eat Finally the food is done And into the kitchen we do run There's turkey, stuffing, gray, and ham Also sweet potatoes, bread, and jam While we eat the deviled eggs My dog stands at our feet and begs For drinks we have soda, water, and tea Which makes everyone have to go pee (hehe) Now that the eating part is done It's time for some fun Everyone all sits on the couch And because they're so full, they have to slouch The T.V. screen shows a football game Which all the women think is lame Afterwards, it's time to say good-bye And everyone leaves with a happy sigh ~Guys are like stars, there are millions of them, but only one can make you dreams come true~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
STUFFING! I love thanksgiving.....or as I call it..... TURKEY DAY!!!!! MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMmmmmmmmmm!!!!! Wonderful poem.. and once again.......... STUFFING!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Great representation of thanksgiving. it's pretty much true, well except for my thanksgiving this year. oh it's gonna suck. i especially liked the part about how women think football games are lame. they're only fun to me if i go to my school's football games, they're always fun.  Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, This was really good, I found the pee part a little too amusing, but good job "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This poem put a big smile on my face. This is totally amazing Nikki  specially, the pee part he he he...the only thing though, what's wrong with football?  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Good one!!!This was really creative...And you are making me really hungry...My tummy is having a conversation with me now... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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