Teen Poetry #3 |
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Lover = Best Friend |
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Tamma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV ![]() |
I woke up this morning, Loving you more than ever. It scares me but I know its true, Our love shall last forever. I hide no secrets from you, That’s why you ought to know: Every kiss and every hug, Just proves I love you so. Sometimes the past takes over And I just lose it all. And then I just can’t help it When the tears fall. You are more than just my lover, You are my best friend as well. And when I think of your help, The tears make my eyes swell. Things can change in an instant, Not once did I expect this: To be held in your arms, And feel from your lips, a kiss. If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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Tamma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Oooooppppppppppppppssss...i fergot the explanation...i wrote this cause sometimes i wonder if he knows that i mean what i say when i tell him i love him. ok, i thimk that all of you know about justin and the vow we made each other...i guess thats what i meant by "It scares me but I know its true, Our love shall last forever." I hope it does ![]() ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Thats such a sweet poem Tamma...believe me, i know how you feel about having a guy say "shurrrrr" when you tell him how much you care..its very annoying but maybe if you showed him this poem...it would be better expressed than spoken words. |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
this was aweosme tamma! i like the way you even made it rhyme, usually that makes it harder. great job, i'm sure he knows u love him! ![]() Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
Wooow Tamma, this poem ir really great, you did a very good job on this one. I'm so happy that everything is working fine, and I'm so happy about the vow and that everything is going great in your life. Your friend, Caz It's been raining since you left me. |
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Tamma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Thanks for the replies!! Well, To tell ya the truth, Justin was the first to say "I love you" heh...I didnt kno what to say...So, when he says he does, I can't help but believe him ![]() ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I really liked this one! It was very emotional... and it flowed so perfectly. Kudos! Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think you did a wonderful job on the poem, you should share it with him if you haven't already. Nice work ![]() "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope![]()
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well it looks like you made the decision and became lovers. I hope all runs well and a great post. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Tamma~I love this!!!I can actually say that this is the exact way that I feel about my boyfriend...Keep him he sounds like he is worth it!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Tamma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Thanx ERIN...I plan on holding on to him...last night, on the phone, he even said "till death do we part" I was a lil shocked...but Oh well, I just hope we last ![]() If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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Acies![]()
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
seems like everyone else said what i was gonna say, hmmmmmmmmmm. Well, hope you're happy and good luck ![]() I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
Awesome poem! That poem shows that you really care about your B/F. A lot. And I know that he knows that you care abour him but I understand the feeling of wanting to keep saying it because it's hard to believe that you and him finally came to be. I know how you feel and this poem is great! niceguy |
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Tamma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
niceguy: You just dont even know... lets see...ive been bruised up, pregnant, beat on, practically raped, punched in the belly, while pregnant, ive dated child molesters, but they got dumped as soon as i found out. hmmm...yea Id say being with Justin is MUCH better than being with those other guys!!! ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ (im not rtying to be mean, just letting off some steam ![]() If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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Dopey Dope![]()
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hmmmmmm.......I really don't know what to say about your letting off steam message. I learned a lot of what you've gone through.........geesh! Well I'm glad you have a nice boyfriend now!! ![]() ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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DancinQueen![]()
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
hey Tamma ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ~!*DQ*!~ "A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
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Tamma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
DancinQueen: I'd love to! Well, Justin and I have been together 2 months, after a really tough break up. About 3, mabbe 4 weeks ago we made the vow to "be together forever" ![]() Need some more info? ![]() ![]() ![]() If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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