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Tamma
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0 posted 2000-11-10 01:32 PM


I woke up this morning,
Loving you more than ever.
It scares me but I know its true,
Our love shall last forever.

I hide no secrets from you,
That’s why you ought to know:
Every kiss and every hug,
Just proves I love you so.

Sometimes the past takes over
And I just lose it all.
And then I just can’t help it
When the tears fall.

You are more than just my lover,
You are my best friend as well.
And when I think of your help,
The tears make my eyes swell.

Things can change in an instant,
Not once did I expect this:
To be held in your arms,
And feel from your lips, a kiss.



If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.



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1 posted 2000-11-10 03:52 PM


Oooooppppppppppppppssss...i fergot the explanation...i wrote this cause sometimes i wonder if he knows that i mean what i say when i tell him i love him. ok, i thimk that all of you know about justin and the vow we made each other...i guess thats what i meant by
"It scares me but I know its true,
Our love shall last forever."

I hope it does  

~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~


If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.



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2 posted 2000-11-10 05:27 PM


Thats such a sweet poem Tamma...believe me, i know how you feel about having a guy say "shurrrrr" when you tell him how much you care..its very annoying but maybe if you showed him this poem...it would be better expressed than spoken words.
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3 posted 2000-11-10 05:42 PM


this was aweosme tamma! i like the way you even made it rhyme, usually that makes it harder. great job, i'm sure he knows u love him!  
Curly


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4 posted 2000-11-10 08:56 PM


Wooow Tamma, this poem ir really great, you did a very good job on this one. I'm so happy that everything is working fine, and I'm so happy about the vow and that everything is going great in your life.
Your friend,
Caz

It's been raining since you left me.

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5 posted 2000-11-11 10:06 AM


Thanks for the replies!! Well, To tell ya the truth, Justin was the first to say "I love you" heh...I didnt kno what to say...So, when he says he does, I can't help but believe him  

~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~


If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.



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6 posted 2000-11-11 10:15 AM


I really liked this one! It was very emotional... and it flowed so perfectly. Kudos!
Jenn


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7 posted 2000-11-11 12:58 PM


I think you did a wonderful job on the poem, you should share it with him if you haven't already.  Nice work

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8 posted 2000-11-11 04:07 PM


Well it looks like you made the decision and became lovers. I hope all runs well and a great post.



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9 posted 2000-11-11 08:53 PM


Tamma~I love this!!!I can actually say that this is the exact way that I feel about my boyfriend...Keep him he sounds like he is worth it!!!


~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

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10 posted 2000-11-12 09:39 AM


Thanx ERIN...I plan on holding on to him...last night, on the phone, he even said "till death do we part" I was a lil shocked...but Oh well, I just hope we last  

If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.



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11 posted 2000-11-13 04:44 PM


seems like everyone else said what i was gonna say, hmmmmmmmmmm.  Well, hope you're happy and good luck  

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12 posted 2000-11-13 04:55 PM


Awesome poem! That poem shows that you really care about your B/F. A lot. And I know that he knows that you care abour him but I understand the feeling of wanting to keep saying it because it's hard to believe that you and him finally came to be. I know how you feel and this poem is great!
niceguy

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13 posted 2000-11-14 06:13 PM


niceguy:
You just dont even know...
lets see...ive been bruised up,
pregnant, beat on, practically raped,
punched in the belly, while pregnant,
ive dated child molesters, but they got dumped as soon as i found out.
hmmm...yea Id say being with Justin
is MUCH better than being with those other guys!!!

~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~


(im not rtying to be mean, just letting off some steam )


If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.



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14 posted 2000-11-15 03:33 PM


Hmmmmmm.......I really don't know what to say about your letting off steam message.
I learned a lot of what you've gone through.........geesh!
Well I'm glad you have a nice boyfriend now!!





I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


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15 posted 2000-11-15 03:43 PM


hey Tamma   i've never really talked to you, so i really dont know whats going on with you and Justin. like your vows, cause you said most of us already know .but i'd be delighted if you would fill me in. wonderful poem, i know how you feel   Keep up the great work and smile!  

~!*DQ*!~


"A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else"

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16 posted 2000-11-15 03:52 PM


DancinQueen: I'd love to! Well, Justin and I have been together 2 months, after a really tough break up. About 3, mabbe 4 weeks ago we made the vow to "be together forever"  

Need some more info?  

~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~  

If you love someone dont put their name in a heart,
put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken
but a circle is continious.



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