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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723
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As I gaze in to the night And my mind starts to wonder I can't help but think What others tend to ponder Who else is staring at the sky And do our eyes gaze At the same single star Amongst this giant maze In a way I feel connected To this entire Earth By the spirit of Mother Nature I feel a sense of worth "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ "I am, who I am and what you think, I don't give a damn" Chilli Peppers |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. I loved it.. I'm always thinking the same things when I look up at those stars...I'm adding this one to my library just so ya know.. ~Carly |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
This was really good...the sky does connect people together...I never really thought about that but its true. I always think about what other people are thinking or doing when I'm doing something. |
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Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
That's exactly what I've thought..esp. the last stanza..  "Controlling my feelings for too long.... And forcing our darkest souls to unfold... And pushing us into self-destruction...." *~Muse*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, Great thoughts here, I really like this. We are all connected, oh, this is so good !< !signature-->"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 11-11-2000).] |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Thank you to every one one who replied. I wrote this poem not expecting ppl to understand what I was thinking. I'm gald I was wrong. "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN" ~Hatebreed~ "I am, who I am and what you think, I don't give a damn" Chilli Peppers |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You know......i really connected with this poem. I often think the same. It's a wonderful thing to know that others understand eh?  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Wow this was really good, you are quite creative. i really liked it i felt it had a great theme. great poem! Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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