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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733
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*Special note: Dear EVERYONE, I'm sorry I haven't replied to your recent poems or been posting lately, so I won't be surprised if you don't reply to this. Again, I'm sorry* Deep Inside There's something Deep inside of me Deep deep down There's things you don't know Don't see I've got it all The grades, the guy Things to do, people to call Is that just the way it seems I've no reason To be unhappy To be depressed When my life's so perfect, so sappy Little Miss Perfect The overachiever, teacher's pet Only child Spoiled little brat Oh the nerve What could I be going through In my perfect little world Nothing like what you have to do Things you don't know Things you don't see Things you've missed Deep inside of me How dare I cry How dare I complain My greatest worry Is that my life might be mundane How can you miss it How can you be so blind as not to see How is it you don't know Deep inside of me I shut you out And don't let it show Lock it up Maybe you'll just never know ~This isn't directed to any one person. It's simple really. There's alot of things going on that I don't talk about and no one knows they're there, so they assume I have nothing wrong with my life. Oh well right? Go ahead, tear it apart, the original got deleted~ |
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Yankee10n20BFF Junior Member
since 2000-11-02
Posts 27T-Town, AL |
It's hard to keep things inside. I do that and I feel so fake towards the people I love cause they think I am happy and suff when deep inside I'm hurting so bad. It really hlps to write things down and stuff. Keep your head up! No matter what you are going through, all you have to do is close your eyes and dream cause no one can take them away from you. |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
this is a nice poem everyone feels this way at one point or another. don't worry about responding to poems, just respond to the ones that you like, or feel strongly about, don't feel obligated to respond to poetry, do it from your heart. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey there. It's very all right that you haven't been replying, most of us understand. I feel exactly like you described in this poem. And it bites. It seems like no one understands...sigh. Well keep pluggin away at solving all those problems.... ~Carly |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
I know what you mean by people thinking that you have the ''perfect life.'' No ones life is perfect, but somepeople just don't understand that everyone has rough spots and things that no one else knows about. People are too judgemental to look behind someone's clothes or attitude and realize that they have problems too. I hope everything works out. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think this poem was well expressed. I know the feeling of having things that no one sees or knows about. It' hard to share with people who don't care, but if you find someone who does, go ahead and open up  And hey, don't worry about replying, we all get busy or distracted sometimes. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I suppose I could reply to this two ways. First... I've been there, sort of. I've gotten the grades, went to the parties, been busy every Fri. and Sat. night with something to do and usually 10 people to do it with. But I've felt empty nonetheless, and happiness like that just fades.Second... I've been the shy one. The loner, the coward trying to rush through the day unnoticed. I see the popular ones, and I know they must be going through SOMETHING, just nothing that bad, if they look like they do all the time...(beautiful and smily) So I can see your POV to a certain extent, but I also see the view on which you are picking apart. I really don't know which I prefer. Probably the happy, busy one... then you have less time to ponder and worry. It's a good poem, regardless. Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Look at all the replies you got!! Plus this one *mines the best of course hehe* Anyway a great poem! keep posting and try to reply some eh?! hehehe....bye!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
cool poem. this was a good one Me "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Yankee- Yeah it does help to write things down, thanks Jose- Thanks...yeah I'll try to respond more...I'm slack I know Child of the Stars- Do you really? *sigh* I'll get over it I guess  DreamerGrl- Thank you!! I agree so much! Dang Lakewalker- Thanks I'm glad you understand Jenn- Well I've sort of seen it from both angles too....it's sort of complicated. I'm kind of in both places at once...but I'm glad someone can relate Thanks!!!Dopey- Yeah can you believe I got so many replies? hehe thanks, I'll try to reply more..... Curly- Woman of many words aye? Lol thanks gurl Thanks soo much for replying.....I had no idea I'd get so many. It means a lot, thanks again  Bel |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
well, im not gonna judge you for i don't have the right to judge anyone. Great poem though..and i'm glad you're saying that you're gonna try to reply to others more. That's the way to do it. thanks for the excellent read. I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Isabel~ You opened something from yourself that I have never seen...I have seen you open yourself up but not like this...I would think that people who have everything they want would be happy but not really...This was a really good piece...Thank you for sharing it...And take all the time you need away from this place...It doesnt matter if you dont always reply just dont leave us for good...You have talent that we like...So make it useful!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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