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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
This poem isn't pased on real life. It just came to me one day so i figured i'd write it down  Our song is playing You take my hand You hold me close The music takes over me We glide across the floor You look into my eyes We are now floating I melt into your arms We are dancing "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Dang, I want that to happen to me. Gee I wonder if I'll ever have a song....it's been how long? Oh well. Maybe it'll happen one day...lol...good job Bel |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
So sweet, so sweet.. sigh..well great job. ~Carly A word is dead When it is said Some say, I say it just Begins to live That day. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a sweet poem. Some day it might come to pass!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
ALL I GOT TO SAY IS SHORT AND SWEET. VERY SWEET HUN KEEP IT UP OKAY? "put the name of the person u love, not in a heart because they alway break but put it in a circle which last forever" |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is so great, I think the simpleness adds to it, nicely done "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Wow...short and sweet is definately a great way to describe this one. God that was sooooo romantic..even tho its not based on a real life experienced i'd just dream of having that happen to me! Wow! |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Thanks for replying! I hope this comes true one day too. I'm glad you guys liked it Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Awww this was so sweet...I hope one day this happens to me!!!Good one!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
Sweet poem. You can really right girl. I think that everyone longs for this to happen to them...and it will someday. Keep on writing. niceguy |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
this is really a very moving piece. very sweet i think im gonna need that KLEENEX to wipe my eyes  he he hethanks for sharing curly. keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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