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Fate...(a little prediction...)
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Fate...(a little prediction...) |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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*Note* I don't know how this was inspired, I mean this poem but it was I was just sitting at the computer when I was living with my ex bf in Mississippi and it just came flowing from my finger tips I mean it had no meaning to me at the time, but after I read it when I got back home I was like Woah!! It really predicted something maybe I knew something that I didn't know then at the time..hehe perhaps a little psychic thing goin on there...but Enjoy... 13 Dec 99 It came to me from out of the darkness Its talons gripping the life out of me Staring into my eyes I saw the one thing I was most frightened of; Myself I finally have come face to face With my own demons that I have tried running from I could not close my eyes Nor run any longer God was telling me something or more like the devil himself Into the blackness I had to stare I could not see glint nor glare Nothing twinkled but my own dismay I was scared wondering what was about to come my way Out of my own despair I cried and I cried for the angels above To show me some kind of guidance and some Godly love The demons face turned into my very own And just spit out laughter from its mouth The pain seeped within my chest I screamed and put up a fight And let out a blood curdling scream that I could no longer go on like this With what seemed to myself as the magic words I felt its talons beginning to dig deep within my heart Deep they sunk yet; from the living it did not allow me to part Once again I found myself staring deep within its eyes And this time it showed me what I needed to know I saw my heart as black as black could be And showing me my ill-fated destiny God himself I knew was not punishing me Nor was the Devil's hand in this It was my own doing, my own dark abyss The more I learned and saw I wished, that I could just lie there and die Instead blood stained tears I began to cry I knew I could no logner take the chance To live my life, to live a lie Nor continue with this hypnotic dance My own demons I knew I must sacrifice to my God And then will I truly belong Belong and live peacefully amongst the innocent ones.. ~I want to be the face you see when you close your eyes, I want to be the touch you need every single night, I want to be your fantasy and be your reality and everything in between...~ Celine Dion [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (edited 11-08-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
this was great. Maybe you are a psychic! If you are, then kindly predict what im doing......hehe  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wow ... incredible imagery Ceinwyn! Psychic or not ... you've penned such powerful thoughts, very gripping, good vs. evil ... and I so love it when "good" wins!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is so good, I like it a lot. It's very well done!! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You simply amaze me with your talent. You are very gifted with you writing ways. Very advanced if i may say. Keep them coming and i'll assure you I'll keep reading them. I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
You are one amazing person...With every poem I read by you I get more and more amazed...You write beautifully and Im glad that I was able to read this one...Keep up the amazing work!!!  People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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