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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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SO you think you are special well think again your stupid, a loser I hate you, I know you don't care, im trying but u wont look my way I have so many names I want to call, but I can't because you are my ex-mother, you walked out on me told me I wasnt good enough, that i was stupid, well so are you I do try!im not a loser!Im not stupid! I may not be a menza like my father was but I can be treated with dignity! Regina It was short...but i know if i cant goign i would get in trouble with on of the moderators.. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. You showed raw emotion in this one. Another one of those in-your-face styled poems. Good job Regina  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
its a very good poem, something i would right about, but with a diffrent meaning. as dope said pure emotion and raw energy, i really liked it Ina keep it up! San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Ditto to the others, this is very good! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
thanks for replying, Javier, Lakewalker and Morouxshi San. I respect you guys all so it was nice to hear what you thought of it. I wanted to write something "in your face" because im having a hard time with my mom and this is exaclty how i wanted it to come across! Regina aka Ina |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
...and "in your face" this was! I totally respect your honesty about your anger and feelings. This was a great poem, and I hope writiing it helped you feel better. That's what poetry is for  Keep smiling hun, this was awesome! ~Kris ~*Won't you come and hold my hand? This world has taken me as far as it can... without your smile.~* ~*If I never said I'm sorry, then I'm wrong, |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Regina~ Thank you for sharing this piece. I can relate to it. My mom walked out of my life about 5 years ago. And to this day I cant get over it. I still see her but she wasnt there for me when I was going through rough times. I hope you get through it. People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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