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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2000-11-07 12:16 PM

It's just me,
It's just another day.
It's just one more chance,
For my life to slip away.
It's just more feelings,
It's just more pain.
It's just one more day,
That i have nothing to gain.
It's just hurt,
It's just a pair of sad eyes.
It's just one more day,
That i live to cry.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2000-11-07 12:30 PM

A wonderful poem! Even though its sad I liked it very much. I hope things are ok with you though shugar, i'd hate to see you all sad all the time. If you need any aid, im here for ya girl.
Anyway a great poem and a wonderful read!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Morouxshi San
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since 2000-10-11

Posts 207
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-11-07 12:48 PM

try to get out of the circle.
eventually the ordinary day will be no more.

San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

3 posted 2000-11-07 02:46 PM

We all have times that we feel like this. I know that life can seem really harsh, but if we have hope and faith in God, nothing can push us from our foundation. Keep hoping for a joyful day, it isn't so far in the future. If you ever need to talk, feel free to e-mail me!

False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference.

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2000-11-07 04:04 PM

I hope you start feeling better if this is how you feel. The poem expressed pain so well, it's very well done.

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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curlygurly
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 276
USA

5 posted 2000-11-07 06:39 PM

WOW do i know how you feel! anyway on a happy note that was awesome. i think i know exactly how you feel

Curly

"So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside"
-Lenny Kravitz

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2000-11-10 02:04 PM

Boy do I feel bad. You know, if that's how you look life to be, it'll never change. Go out there and create your own destiny. Make it the way you want it to be. It's all up to you...Hope this helps

p.s. SMILE

there you go
again SMILE

I'm smiling too

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

apsara
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since 2000-11-09

Posts 70

7 posted 2000-11-11 09:06 AM

Its just one more chance
For my life to slip away

I can relate to that line but for what its worth, realize that you can make anything work your way if you hold on. Live on the bright side of things and look to the open skies for comfort when the tears starts to fall.

love,
apsara

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