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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
Friend you use to be so nice Then one day you started being mean It hurt like ever before. Friend you won't talk to me I don't know what I did But I forgive you and you should forgive me. ~*~Minna~*~ Hey the Princess is back my other screen name CrazyPrincessAngelDevil got messed up!  My email has changed my webpage hasn't go check it out for yourself. ~*~Pretty Girl~*~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Nicely done poem, and welcome with the new screen name, I hope this one doesn't get messed up too! Good work  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Its good that you are forgiving but why are you forgiving if you dont even know what you did??? Think about it...But you wrote a good poem...Keep up the good work!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
Short sweet and it gets the point across. Good poem. write more. Sorry about your account. Have a nice day or nite!Whichever.~JeNnYeMeShAn~ "If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
sorry about the account but glad to see you got a new one. Great start for this account, and i hope to see more of you around!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Short but direct...It amazes me how some people could put their emotions in such little words, but still come out perfect. thanks for the read keep ya head upI see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
This poem was really good...i know what you feel like, losing a friend like that. I think people drift apart and people change...and sometimes there's no real reason for it, but it just happens. |
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