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Wet
Member

since 1999-07-25

Posts 60
Brentwood, Tn

0 posted 2000-11-07 12:02 PM

We are the ones who live under the glowing stars.
To see the stars we have to be at peace.
Free the soul,
Free the mind,
Thats all you have to do.
When the stars come to life,
And the night remains still,
You can hear the thoughts from watchers like you.
Deep inside the heart of us,
You can feel the energy flow through everyone.
At this time everyone is nothing,
But nothing is everything.
For when energy like this is so great,
Not even the stars can compare with it.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2000-11-07 01:10 AM

What a great poem. One night i went on a hill and started to look at the stars and was engulfed by this serene mood. It was wonderful just like this poem.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2000-11-07 09:15 AM

a very beautiful picture you have painted with your words..I especially like these lines

When the stars come to life,
And the night remains still,

I can feel you watching
As the breeze sends a chill
From the indigo skies
under moonbeams it lends
a whisper of hope
as the morning ascends...

I hope you don't mind...just brought me some warm thoughts...
on this very cool morning

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-11-07 03:47 PM

Hey,
Great job with this, I like the way it's written. Nice work

"At this time everyone is nothing,
But nothing is everything.

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

http://www.thehungersite.com

curlygurly
Member

since 2000-09-12

Posts 276
USA

4 posted 2000-11-07 07:12 PM

This was a really good poem. i like the whole idea, it was awesome! you're a very talented poet

Curly

"So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside"
-Lenny Kravitz

Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

5 posted 2000-11-07 09:21 PM

Hey. I loved it. I just loved it..whoa..an awesome poem for star people like me...

~Carly

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