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Insight of the Unwanted
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Insight of the Unwanted |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
Here's a very short poem that came to mind one night that i thought encompassed a world of ideas of those who are seperated from the "norm" of society. Our misconceptions are what drive them to kill us.....so without anymore premature interpretation here it is...... touch him on the head they lie and kill outcasts of the world dying in an open field Swift as a shadow, short as any dream; Brief as the lightning in the collied night, That in a spleen unfolds both heaven and earth, And ere a ma |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Wow, what an introduction for a poem  But the poem is good, I think we have to try hard to learn to understand everyone around us, or else the world will only produce one "norm" that people feel they have to stick to or be left out. Good poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Short but sooo powerful..Wow..speechles.. ~Carly |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
very good poem, and yes very good introduction to it also. San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A very strong poem. A great read!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
wow!!! I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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