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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Please love me for who I am < !signature-->For what I'm about to be And for my unfolding destiny Please be there when I cry at night And wake up dripping with fright Hold me tenderly in your arms And whisper a sweet lullabye of words Ending and fighting the demons off just like Excalibur Can't you tell that I've been alone too long Drifting off in the dark Waking up constantly Dreaming between fantasy and reality As my candle light flickers in the night Dancing and prancing amongst the twilight And the shadows clutching at my mind So please love me if you can Never leave me and keep me safe from harm For I'm beggining to think that I am spell bound And that your words are as mighty as King Arthur's sword... "Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night" ~Crash and Burn~ [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (edited 11-06-2000).] |
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liqwidnik Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 33Mantua, NJ, USA |
Ceinwyn- I take you have read the Arthurian Legends But anyway I loved the poem it expresses some good emotions and I absolutely loved it. Keep up with the work |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. I love the theme you used here, with Excalibur and everything. It was pieced together with a certain....flare. I loved it, and enjoyed reading it.  < !signature-->747 fell out of Heaven Crashed through the roof of a 7-11 You're working on a slurpee Things get hazy Reach for a twinkie now you're pushing up daisies? Do you know where you're gonna go? [This message has been edited by Child of the Stars (edited 11-06-2000).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This was really well done, I like it a lot "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
With every poem I read by you I get more and more amazed...I love your writing...You have talent keep it up!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yes as I read you more i come to realize your passion for medievil times. wonderful!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
seems like you are a damsel in distress. Whoever you are summoning, i hope he really is as noble as King Arthur. Forget the lancelots for they stab people in the back. Good luck. Thanks for the royal read  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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