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Stephanya
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since 2000-11-03
Posts 63
Berkshire County~USA~

0 posted 2000-11-06 02:46 PM


savor the days when you look to the sky
you don't have to worry, you don't have to cry
you just look to the clouds with a grin on your face
and invite the sun to your happy embrace

you will be happy someday
no more pain, no more pain
it will come as a surprise on a plain old day
you will know that your heart is sewn back together
you will know you have friends that will be there forever
you will find love from someone that isn't a jerk, or a player or a dog who just needs a perk
you will know that the life you once lived is behind
you will see all the colors that experience will unblind
you will feel butterflies when he touches you
you will cry to think that lovers are too few
you will wonder if there is much more you can do
to make life any better for those related to you
and you'll close your eyes then and cry some sweet tears
they will see what is like once we get through these years
Someday you'll be happy, i promise you that
someday both our tummies will be fatter than fat
and we'll have children that play in the park near our houses
we'll have pool parties and Tupperware parties without any of our spouses
we'll make dinner for them every night of the week,
and make love to them twice that much until we are weak,
our hubbies will golf and go show off their cars,
while we go shopping with their credit cards,
there is nothing that will make us an unhappy bunch,
can you picture us all dressed up for Easter brunch?
people will know us all through the town,
the head of the PTA, and volunteer work around,
that is what it will be like when we are married,
when we grow up and realize life is not scary,
we'll know that whatever got us through got us through
just as long as you stick by me,
I'll stick by you.

~audi (7/25/00)


I love you, too Audrey!-»¦«-I GeT CaUgHt uP iN OuR MeMoRiEz ThE BeSt GiFt AnYoNeZ EvEr GiVeN mE WhEn i LoOk BaCk i CrY WiTh a sMiLe AnD wHeN tHeRe ArE nOMoRe tEaRz 2 sHeD I ThAnK GoD We'Re BeSt fRiEnDz-»¦«-

(:***stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."
::

© Copyright 2000 Stephani B.-01201 - All Rights Reserved
Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
1 posted 2000-11-06 03:33 PM


This is a really good poem about being life long friends. I'm happy you have someone like this, and tell you friend I like it

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
2 posted 2000-11-06 03:34 PM


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"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

[This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 11-06-2000).]

Slim
Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 49
Kentucky, USA
3 posted 2000-11-06 09:38 PM


i luved this poem!! this is truly a sign of a long lasting friendship between you two! your friend did a great job!

Slim

"just because you dont know it or havent seen it, doesnt mean it isnt possible"

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
4 posted 2000-11-06 09:51 PM


Sounds like you are a really good person and that she is a really good friend to you...Thanks for sharing and tell your friend good work!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
5 posted 2000-11-07 01:08 AM


What a wonderful tribute to you. You must feel like a very special person. I know I would!



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Stephanya
Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 63
Berkshire County~USA~
6 posted 2000-11-07 01:52 AM


I definitely felt great when I read it. I cry evreytime I read it though. i lov eher so much. She's just like one of my sisters (I already have 3). Thanks everyone, and I'll be sure to let her know what you all said  

(:***stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."
::

Acies
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Posts 7665
Twilight Zone
7 posted 2000-11-10 03:49 PM


I was wondering if you could ask your friend to join passions.  She is an awesome writer.  I love it a lot.  From heartaches to glory.  Wha a wonderful piece.  tell her thanks, and thanks for sharing this

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Stephanya
Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 63
Berkshire County~USA~
8 posted 2000-11-10 04:35 PM


She;d love to, but she's too busy with school, the army, and cheerleading. the poor thing doesn't even have time to write me an e-mail or call me on the phone  (

(:***stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."
::

curlygurly
Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276
USA
9 posted 2000-11-10 05:44 PM


That was sooooo sweet! mine wasn't that good. it's always nice getting something from someone telling you how much they care about you. that was sooooooooooooo sweet!  
Curly


"So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside"
-Lenny Kravitz


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