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About a Raver |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
-=About a Raver=- great, im talking to a raver... i just want to go home... i want nothing to do with this world. not fair, is it? ack im talking to a raver. always with their artificial fun. brought by artificial highs. through artificial pills. damn, im talking to a raver. has it been that long? its probably that im sober. and, well, shes not. -Morouxshi San San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job san, you know this is not one of your best, but like you said "what's the worst they'll say? LIke they did to you ....oh javier your poem didnt make me think!" so hehehe......there you go. I was going to try and quote you on that, but the icq history messed up on me!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
its really my fault that its not that good. i just did it while talking to you... so where i wrote it was in your message... San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I guess I don't get the whole connection of talking to a river. But it's monday and I'm tired and I don't even know if there's even something to get. But anyway, "wow, this made me think". ha, sorry, um, keep posting for us  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
San, Why would you ever talk to a river?!?! Hahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OK no seriously folks.....the poem is about a RAVER. People who go to RAVES...parties with lots of drugs, mainly XTC. "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
are you saying you dont like us ravers or what?we don;t all get high on XTC....but most of us do...well it was kool because it was like it was honest because i know alot of people are like that when they talk to me and i say i rave.....wtv ~Ina~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think this shows how tired I was, I totally read river, not raver. Wow, that's bad. I don't think I should stop by here when I'm tired anymore nope, I'll come when I'm alive and awake  ...sorry bout that San. Maybe someday i'll learn how to read Ok, but anyway, yeah, good job< !signature--> "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 11-07-2000).] |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Thanks for that added piece there dopey lol. Great poem san it was pretty cool. Ravers aren't that bad i guess, not like i'm one, pretty much the opposite. anyway great poem! Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. Sowwy I couldn't reply to this earlier. Anyways, it wuz purdy kewlll. Haha. Great job man. ~Carly |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Lake, I was on icq and replies to the poem and was just chilling. Then san tells me that you thought the poem was about a river. I couldn't stop laughing my head off. That was probably the funniest thing all week. Hahahaha......A river.....phew you musta been tired! haha...... I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
hahaha, glad I could amuse you. Will this ever be forgotten? "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Could what ever be forgotten? <---- forgotten I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
wow, eleven replies so far... lake, its ok, you said you were tired, nothing to worry bout... Ina, i have no problem with ravers, actually some of my closest friends are ravers, but the poem is about this one girl i met, to tell you the most i thought she was boring. therefore the part with atificial highs and stuff... (thanks for the confesion though) isnt dope the greatest? he explained it and everything!... -San San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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