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luvnkris
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Perth, Australia

0 posted 2000-09-17 09:48 AM


Leaving me…

You can’t just run away
When life gets too tough
The only way to deal with your problems
Is to face them, no matter how rough

You think if you leave
That they will too
But believe me if you hide
They will find you soon

And leaving us all behind
I thought you cared
And to leave your mum
Doesn’t that idea make you scared?

There is nothing I can do
To change your mind
To help you realize all that you have
Please just be kind

Don’t leave us all
For a happier life there
As much as I want you to be happy
Why can’t you be happy anywhere

I need you babe
I thought you said forever
But now you’ll just leave
Even though you said you’ll leave never…



*my best friend just told me that she is moving away to the other side of australia, because she hates her life here so much. she doesn't care about how she will hurt everyone so much, she just wants to get rid of her problems...  
*


* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*



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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
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1 posted 2000-09-17 12:26 PM


Luv~~~Did you ever think maybe its good for her???Maybe she doesnt want to face her problems just yet...I mean its not like you'll never hear from her again...I mean now days there is so many ways you could contact a person...But friends do come and go...Best of luck to you and your friend...

~*If I was to die & could be 1 thing I would be a tear born in your eyes live on your cheeks and die on your lips*~

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2 posted 2000-11-07 10:07 PM


tell her that's the reason why she has friends.  You are gonna be there to help her go thru her rough times.  show her th epoem, maybe it'll work...that's if she hasn't left yet...i see i replied to this poem a  little late...sorry...thanks for sharing

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Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2000-11-08 01:14 AM


I'll have to agree with erin on this one.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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Lakewalker
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4 posted 2000-11-08 02:00 PM


Yeah this is  a little old.  How are things going with your friend?  Did she move?  Are you still friends?  How are you doing?  Well, good job on the poem.

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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luvnkris
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since 2000-08-31
Posts 144
Perth, Australia
5 posted 2000-11-09 09:01 AM


hey, thanx for all the replys!
things are improving for her too! i think she's gonna stay here! which is great!  
we drifted away from each other for a little while but now we are back close again!
anyways thanx again!
Jo
xoxox


* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*



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