Teen Poetry #3 |
My living is a dream |
TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
Dreaming is better than living, you deceive yourself into believing that life is sweet, no evil, no lies, no stormy nights filled with wailing cries. No facing the truth no bleeding eyes, being something in my pretending. Dreaming is easier than living. Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
||
© Copyright 2000 TearsOfPearls - All Rights Reserved | |||
~Night_Mist~ Junior Member
since 2000-06-24
Posts 31Calgary, AB Canada |
Hello: I love your poem. It's very beautiful. I like your comparisions. Keep writing. Luv, ~Night_Mist~ |
||
Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
this poem is BEAUTIFUL...dont you wish that we could live in our dreams instead of this world fill with hate and racism...but our dreams arent reality...i give you props for this poem beacause i really like it... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
||
Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
great poem. but see i've been dead to the world for so long i no longer live here i live in my own reality. one that i created inside my head. P.S sorry if i seem a bit insane beside the fact that i am its because i'm moving in like ten days and have to start all over last year of highschool somewhere else and i hate the idea but i have to go. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
||
LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Dreaming is a great escape, and it may be easier than living, but you shouldn't live within a dream. You'll miss more than you could ever imagine. Feel free to dream, but come back to reality every once in awhile. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
||
TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
Thanks you guys. Yeah, I agree, it is great to dream, but sometimes it is so much easier than living in reality. So...when you live in a dream world, every now and than, reality walks up to you and slaps yout through the face and brings you crashing down, and that is why Jeremiah doesn't seem insane to me, I completely understand though our situations are totally different. This just makes you wanna live more in a dream world. Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets transferred from the wind to the water. What started off as a breeze 1 000km away, ends up as a glass-faced barrel at some far off beach. |
||
Lani_DarkOne Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 152UK |
This is GREAT. It's also very true. I'm a dreamer, so much so that I (before) used to live in this fantasy world...like turning your back to the TRUTH....and decieving myself. And when reality does slap you in the face it hurts like hell...that's why I'm keeping my eyes open.. "Dreaming is easier than living"...too true...keep writing Tears Of Pearls!! |
||
Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |