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J1GGZ
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since 2000-06-27
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0 posted 2000-06-27 02:47 PM


      ~ TH3 0N3 ~ By: J1GGZ

      I've been searching for 17 years,
      Nights of endless tears,
      Facing my fears,
      Nerdy as it might be,
      I knew the moment I met you,
      You were the girl for me.
      To me thats how it seems,
      You were the girl of my dreams.

      Sometimes I wish I wouldnt of said goodbye,
      Always wondering how you would of felt,
      With a real niceguy.

      ~ N1C3GUY5 ~ SW ~



© Copyright 2000 J1GGZ - All Rights Reserved
LoveBug
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1 posted 2000-06-27 03:58 PM


Welcome to Passions!

It's always hard to find the one thing that you want the most and have to let it go. I wish you better luck in the future!

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

Snickers
Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 88
East Haddam, CT
2 posted 2000-06-27 04:39 PM


Welcome to Passions!! Nice first post, hope to see more from u!  

~<3 Alwayz~
**Nikki**


~*~*~*~*"We can complain because roses have thorns, or we can rejoice because thorns have roses." *~*~*~*~

Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S
3 posted 2000-06-28 02:06 AM


welcome to this place long to read more of you real soon.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Vball Chickie1624
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 116
New York
4 posted 2000-06-28 08:18 AM


Welcome to Passions.  This is a great poem.  I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep writing

Luv ya,
Danielle  

"Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you

Vball Chickie1624
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 116
New York
5 posted 2000-06-28 08:18 AM


Welcome to Passions.  This is a great poem.  I look forward to reading more of your work. Keep writing

Luv ya,
Danielle  

"Dream what you want to dream; go where you want to go; be what you want to be, because you have only one life and one chance to do all the things you

~Night_Mist~
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since 2000-06-24
Posts 31
Calgary, AB Canada
6 posted 2000-06-28 05:03 PM


Hello:
   Welcome to passions! That's a very cute poem. I loved it. Hope to hear more from you! Keep writing!  

Luv,
~Night_Mist~  

Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
7 posted 2000-06-28 05:07 PM


WELCOME!!!!!i hope that you will enjoy yourself here as much as i do...well your poem is nice...and i hope to read more of them...

~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~

LIL.MAMA
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since 2000-06-26
Posts 32

8 posted 2000-06-29 09:45 PM


HEY WELCOME TH EPOEM WAS SWEET HOPE TO SEE MORE I HOPE YOU ENJOY THIS PLACE AS MUCH AS I HAVE.
Nikkisweet
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 183
Tx, Dallas
9 posted 2000-06-29 10:40 PM


Wonderful poem...I wonder when I'll find my true love....anyways keep them coming and welcome!

Within you I lose myself.
Without you I find myself wanting to become lost again.
-unkown-

Jacman
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since 2000-06-27
Posts 291
Dwight Il, US
10 posted 2000-06-30 02:49 PM


I like this poem alot.  It's very simple but it makes a profound point.  Welcome to the forum, hope to see some more of your talent soon.

jason

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
11 posted 2007-11-19 08:10 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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