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Rhiannon Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 95Fayetteville, TN USA |
I lay here thinking Of how it will be When we're All grown up Will we last through Morgages and jobs and kids Will the passsion we feel when we kiss Remain for all those years? Will the plans we're making so earnestly Really come to fruition? The love i feel is unquestionable, Unrelenting, real But will the foundations we're laying Be strong enough to hold our lives Up, till death do us part? Will we learn that you can't win By following a passionate heart? Or instead, will we prove them wrong Show them that we are strong That we were never just a teenage tryst Two shadows meeting in the mist But a loving, working, modern love Balancing the odds, showing them all That it's possible to find the love of your dreams Before you're old enough to know what it means? |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Great poem rhiannon. i think that this is always a question that comes up during a teenage relationship and it's something to consider. but don't worry about it. you're young and you'll have the rest of ur life to think that that  Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well modern love.......i don't think that there ever was a fashion in love. I think love is something that's basically been the way it was since the dawn of time. I think teenage love is just something that is a bit more complex than other ages because not only do we have to deal with what older couples do.....but we're all confused and messed up with questions on if this is "true love" we're feeling and so on....bla blabla i ramble bla blabla i ramble more bla bla. good poem!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, really good poem here, I like it! These are some interesting questions that everyone will have to answer for themselves someday, good thoughts! For some reason I just really love this line:"Two shadows meeting in the mist" "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Slim Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 49Kentucky, USA |
i really liked this...the same questions that many teens ask repeatedly over and over again. gives a teen relationship something to think about every once in a while. thanx for sharing.. great work!! "just because you dont know it or havent seen it, doesnt mean it isnt possible" |
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Rhiannon Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 95Fayetteville, TN USA |
Thank you all. |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Wow, i loved this! Such a true poem - I'm so cheesy, I always wanted the one I end up with in life to be my high school sweetheart cuz I think it'd be so cute lol. But don't try to rush anything or worry too much about the future. Enjoy your young relationship, and if it's meant to be it will last Teens are just as capable of being in love as adults, maybe even more so, so don't let anyone tell you it's just "puppy love" (I hate that expression!) Good luck and all the best  ~Kris ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ ~When it comes to me, you have to stretch your definition of normal a little bit.~ |
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