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Rhiannon
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Fayetteville, TN USA

0 posted 2000-11-05 01:47 PM



I take some pills to go to sleep
Just so i don't have to think
Of what you are and what you mean
I guess you're somewhere in between
So i get lost inside your grey
Wishing i knew what to say
You don't make it easy
For me, cause it's so hard to
Relate to you-
I love you but I can't be
Strung along and you seem to be
Nonchalant about it
You don't want to hurt me so
You lie to keep your feelings
Under wraps, while i sit alone
Wondering what is going on
You keep me in silence,
Not knowing what is real
You say sweet things then you
Change into
Someone i don't know-
I wish i did cause i'm sure that
I'd love him if i knew him
Trust me and i'll protect you
Love me and i'll comfort you
Feel anything but indifference
Feel anything for me-

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Child of the Stars
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1 posted 2000-11-05 02:28 PM


  Hey. WoW. This was amazing...It sounds like terrible inspiration..I mean a painful situation.. but the poem rocked...So yeah, try to keep your head toward the sky..Good luck in life...

  ~Carly< !signature-->

747 fell out of Heaven
Crashed through the roof of a 7-11
You're working on a slurpee
Things get hazy
Reach for a twinkie now you're pushing up daisies?
Do you know where you're gonna go?


[This message has been edited by Child of the Stars (edited 11-05-2000).]

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
2 posted 2000-11-05 02:37 PM


Sounds like a tough situation, I hope he opens up to you.  The poem is very good, thanks for sharing it with us   I really like this part:

"Trust me and i'll protect you
Love me and i'll comfort you"


"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2000-11-05 04:19 PM


This was great. Great thoughts and i hope it all works out for u



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Rhiannon
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since 1999-07-28
Posts 95
Fayetteville, TN USA
4 posted 2000-11-09 05:47 PM


Thanks  
Kandi
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 354
North of Hell
5 posted 2000-11-09 07:26 PM


UmmM...Wow! You totally Just described the way I'm feeling With my boyfriend Right now - he has trouble opening up. So I know how ur feeling. But I think it's really Great how at the end of the poem you reassure whoever it's about that You'll be there for them. Hope everything works Out.
~~~~kriS


~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~

~When it comes to me, you have to stretch your definition of normal a little bit.~

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