Teen Poetry #3 |
Feel anything |
Rhiannon Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 95Fayetteville, TN USA |
I take some pills to go to sleep Just so i don't have to think Of what you are and what you mean I guess you're somewhere in between So i get lost inside your grey Wishing i knew what to say You don't make it easy For me, cause it's so hard to Relate to you- I love you but I can't be Strung along and you seem to be Nonchalant about it You don't want to hurt me so You lie to keep your feelings Under wraps, while i sit alone Wondering what is going on You keep me in silence, Not knowing what is real You say sweet things then you Change into Someone i don't know- I wish i did cause i'm sure that I'd love him if i knew him Trust me and i'll protect you Love me and i'll comfort you Feel anything but indifference Feel anything for me- |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. WoW. This was amazing...It sounds like terrible inspiration..I mean a painful situation.. but the poem rocked...So yeah, try to keep your head toward the sky..Good luck in life... ~Carly< !signature--> 747 fell out of Heaven Crashed through the roof of a 7-11 You're working on a slurpee Things get hazy Reach for a twinkie now you're pushing up daisies? Do you know where you're gonna go? [This message has been edited by Child of the Stars (edited 11-05-2000).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Sounds like a tough situation, I hope he opens up to you. The poem is very good, thanks for sharing it with us I really like this part: "Trust me and i'll protect you Love me and i'll comfort you" "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. Great thoughts and i hope it all works out for u "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Rhiannon Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 95Fayetteville, TN USA |
Thanks |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
UmmM...Wow! You totally Just described the way I'm feeling With my boyfriend Right now - he has trouble opening up. So I know how ur feeling. But I think it's really Great how at the end of the poem you reassure whoever it's about that You'll be there for them. Hope everything works Out. ~~~~kriS ~*Things you see the way you see them will never be seen again*~ ~When it comes to me, you have to stretch your definition of normal a little bit.~ |
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