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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733
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Planned I had it all planned out in my head From my cunning smile To what you'd have said I knew the time I knew the place I knew all the details Even the expression on your face I planned what I'd have said Maybe I'd make you mad And your face would turn red Maybe I'd make you feel bad Like you know you should Maybe I'd make you sad I really hoped I would About three months since I've last seen you Not much about you changed Your skin a little darker Your hair shorter and rearranged Even now You still have that tone That condescending attitude I wish I hadn't known I don't hate you I'm not so low I should just give it up These feelings often show Funny It's almost like I wanted to compensate for the pain you caused her No matter how many months ago The scar's engraved upon her A hundred times I had it all planned out in my head But you simply glanced over And said "hello" instead ~ Hi there, let me breifly explain. I'm sick of writing about myself, so I wrote this about my best friend's ex. And I know there's a certain person out there who might read it and say "oh no not again, when will she give it up?" Well, person, just bear with me here. I saw her ex at a football game the other day, I knew he'd be there, and we had elaborate responses to what we thought he'd ask. All he did was give me a look and say "hello." Well that's about it, sorry it sucks so bad!~ [This message has been edited by Isabel Galaxia (edited 11-05-2000).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I don't think this sucks, in fact I'd say it's pretty good. Good writing, keep it up  ....oh, and plans never seem to work out, do they!< !signature-->"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 11-05-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great......a little tribute to your friends personal life is always nice. Keep it up!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Isabel~Its good to see you posting more poems...I thought that this was really good...So dont think it sucks cuz it doesnt... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
it doesn't suck. and i really wish he had asked because i'd like to have had my date rubbed in his face, even if it was just my buddy not an actual date. like his "10 girls that liked him" that was BULL cuz he never went out with any. well i really liked this one, it hit close to home, lol Me "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
It's good to see you back! I know what it's like, you plan everything out, and when it's time to do it... everything changes. It's happened to me a thousand times, and it never gets any better. You describe it well. Keep up the great work! False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I hope you've learned that if you have bad intentions, you never win, whatever the situation. Thanks for the read. And hey, this doesn't suck. Just don't plan anything bad again I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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