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my river of tears
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my river of tears |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
a newborn tear slowly floats away as I watch and yet another comes forth a glistening light reflecting burning emotions and not only does it hurt, but aches in agony around the rocks and beneath the painful wraths of the rushing waterfall my tear tells my story Sun comes out, but still my tears fall and I, I am all alone again an endless sea of tears I drown in Painful memories come again and I am quickly saddened overwhelmed by all the times I actually believed in myself a flowing river now, my endless, burning tears all from the eyes of a sad and lonely girl < !signature--> *Being an angel doesn't mean having a halo or wings, it means doing the right thing and wanting to make a difference* [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 11-04-2000).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Jess I really don't know what to say to you. You are in such pain....and I know you don't really want advice about it. Or do you? Whatever it is, I'll always be here to lend an ear, okay? Do not forget that. If could just let your pain disappear, I would...but I can't. And the only thing I could do is listen. It's gonna take gutts on your part to share your saddest feelings to someone, I do understand that. But at least, take my offer into consideration. I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
What acire said is right..you do sound like your in a lot of pain. But i never heard tears expressed with such emotion. It was completely beautiful. I'm sorry your in a pain..but unfortunately it comes around. Like acire said i'm here to talk to...i'm probably goin through the same thing as you and if i'm not its just good to talk. Feel better hun...E-mail me if you want. |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
Hi, I really feel you in this peom. It's very powerful. Honestly it made me cry because as of now I feel that way. Hopefully you feel better soon. Have a good one hun! Take care! ~JeNnYeMeShAn~ "If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow so much pain wrapped within this poem. I hope all gets well. Good luck and keep posting, you've been gone for a while.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've captured such sorrow within these lines Jess, beautifully expressed and written. You're in my thoughts ... hugs to you ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Well girl, it's been a long time since I've talked to you, I'll try to e-mail you soon. If it makes you feel any better, I'm not perfectly peachy myself. So much has gone on lately, *sigh* hehe. It's a great poem...keep your head up SMILE  Bel |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Woah, this was a really good poem, I think it's very well done. The pain behind feels so real and I'm sorry you have to have it. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Erin, Kiley, etc.... have not even read this yet. What's going on? hmmmmmmmmm ~*bump*~  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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