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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
blindly trudging through the delusions of life I break away from the mentally altered realities of my misconceptions and thought generated understandings My childish reasonings now s h a t t e r e d by truth or fiction (i don't know) as society depicts a false serenity within our flaws substituted by vanity < !signature--> *Being an angel doesn't mean having a halo or wings, it means doing the right thing and wanting to make a difference* [This message has been edited by StarPryncess17 (edited 11-06-2000).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WOW!!! BRAVO!!! This deserves a standing ovation. You may assume that this is my favorite of all your poems so far. The whole poem is just perfect. Feelings well expressed. "blindly trudging through the delusions of life I break away from the mentally altered realities of my misconceptions and thought generated understandings My childish reasonings now s h a t t e r e d by truth or fiction (i don't know) as society depicts a false serenity within our flaws substituted by vanity This is good.....i really mean it I'm in total awe right now Jess --- keep ya head up I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey i thought this whole poem rocked completely. I am in full agreement with acire.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Hey it's great, I agree. Keep writing okay? Smile Bel |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey! THIS WAS AMAZING! I hate reality too!!! Heh heh..well I loved it. Wow.  ~Carly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I totally agree with the others, this poem is awesome. The way you wrote "s h a t t e r e d" really caught my attention, it's perfect. This poem is so good!!! I'm adding it to my private library thing, I really like it. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
those that don't read this is missing one of the greatest poems ever posted here in teenpoetry.....your loss i guess..so, bump  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jessica~ Wow I cant believe that I missed this one...Please forgive me...I agree with Lakewalker you caught my attention with that one...Keep up the good work girl!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I can't believe they're still missing this. If I were to vote on one of the best poems I've read, this would be in the top and i just don't understand why these people are missing it  ~*bump*~ again I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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