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liqwidnik Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 33Mantua, NJ, USA |
years ago when you were you and when I was I we met,we loved and we left Now when you are you and I am I we are different But we meet once again things have changed but one thing remains the same you still took something from me You still have it in you Something I will never get back Something that was so special was teared from this scared little girl you have it and I want it back why did you take it from me? it's too late now you no longer want it but you have to keep it for it is impossible for me to get it back not from you not from ayone I lost it..... forever |
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JennyeMeshan Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103Cecil, Wisconsin USA |
Very powerful poem. I know how you feel. The same thing happened to me. That's for posting and hope to read more from you in the near future. Take care! And stay strong! ~JeNnYeMeShAn~ "If thou can wait then thou shall stay" -Destiny's Child |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Geesh, it's so sad to see all these girls who are fet-up with how horrid men stole there virginity. Sorry gal, it bites the big one. Hope you get ok though.... Great pome, much appreciated read.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Good job expressing these feelings, but I'm sorry you have to feel this way. The poem is really good  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is one of those reasons why men get a bad reputation. And all are branded as the same. Well done on expressing your emotions. Keep your head up and thanks for sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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