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liqwidnik Junior Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 33Mantua, NJ, USA |
My world spins My life is upside down I'm in the middle My dad on one side My mom on the other My arms bleed I throw up again I cry and cry but noone sees What are you people doing to me? Can't you see? You are killing me My mind gets played with my heart is a toy broken and glued back together noone truely wants to mend it just cover up the pain only for more pain to be added Slowly I am dying my world crumbles life becomes meaningless. "We can not truely love someone with whom we never laugh"- Agnes Repplier |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I cant specifically relate to this poem but i think my friend can especially with the whole mom on one side and dad on the other. great poem tho but i'm sorry that you feel that way...just keep your head up and hopefully things will get better. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yea that situation always causes pain. Especially for somebody who is caught right dead spack in the middle. I hope all clears up soon and if not, we here at passions are a great community of shoulders to cry on.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've expressed your sorrow and frustration well in this piece Liqdnik. It's so very difficult when you feel caught in the middle of this type of situation. I hope you will be able to talk to your parents, and let them know how you feel. They may not be aware of how their actions are affecting you. Please take care ... Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Yeah, good job expressing your frustrations and I hope you make it through this alright. Good poem! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Hey, keep your head up, ok? It makes me feel bad to see others bleed in the same way as I have. Stay strong...remember that we are all a family here in passions and i think all would agree to me when i say you can talk to anyone of us....remember that  smile I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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