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A Lonely Wish |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI 
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After having to 'face reality' much too often in the past little while, I'm wishin for my fantasy world back...but it seems to be lost forever..so yeah...enjoy... Fantasy, oh Fantasy Without you I cannot be Alive, for true reality Will never get its grip on me. Fantasy, sweet Fantasy I live in dreams, so I shall be The Princess of my fairy tree From now until eternity. Fantasy, my Fantasy If I ask you to marry me You'll not refuse and say that we Shall never love so truthfully! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Child~ This was really cute...Thanks for sharing it... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I think this was a very good poem, and Stars dont worry reality isnt really THAT bad after all...  San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this was really great. The rhyme scheme kicks butt and im glad to have read it. I too love the fantasy world. THIS KICKED BUTT!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
Hey that was really cute!! I liked it!! Keep up the great work! Luv, ~*~Sweetstuff~*~< !signature--> ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 11-04-2000).] |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a great poem. I know what it's like to live in a dream, and the horrible feeling when it comes crashing down. I hope you never stop dreaming! False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
 It's been raining since you left me. |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
This was really good. Great poem Curlz "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
This was really good. Great poem Curlz "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
This was really good. Great poem Curlz "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Curly liked this so much she posted up 3 times!!!!!!!! WAH00!!!!!! "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
LOL!! It's so good to be loved!!! Thanks so much everyone!! Specially curlz!! lol. Thanks again guys.. ~Carly Forever has ended, and never came too soon... |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Sometimes we need a little fantasy in our lives, nicely done, I like it < !signature-->"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 11-05-2000).] |
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Caz Member
since 2000-09-13
Posts 133Concepción, Chile |
 It's been raining since you left me. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It's not bad to dream once in a while, but you're gonna have to face reality one of these days. That's the way life goes i guess, it may not be perfect, it may not be kind, but at least it helps us grow to become better individuals. keep ya head upI see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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