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If God Says "Yes
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If God Says "Yes |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
If God says "yes" Then we are meant to be And we will be together Forever you and me If God says "yes" Then we can truly say That we will be together Forever and a day If God says "yes" An answer we pursue Then we will be together And we will say "I do" If God says "yes" And makes the most of our life Then we would ready ourselves To be husband and wife ~*~SCG~*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. It's good to see a happy couple fully express what they feel for each other. I hope everything is good. The format of this poem is great and the ryhme scheme aswell. Keep it up! Hope to see you around more, you dissapeared for a while.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like that you're asking God to see if it is the right thing to do  And good writing, I love the poem  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I love this! I also believe that every successful couple is put together by God. Remember, if God doesn't say "yes" to this person, He has someone much better waiting for you! False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
God has good plans for you and your husband SCG...Thats why you and him are together!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Dopey_dope: Thanks again for the compliment..I thought the rhyme scheme was a little off, though Lakewalker: Thanks! Lovebug: Glad you liked it Erin: Thanks for the compliment ~*~SCG~*~ |
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