Teen Poetry #3 |
Outside the Box |
hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
If one lives inside the box they cannot see what is outside...so exists the same phenomenon outside. i exist outside the box watching you living within believing I was in the right now i know you're not right. wasting your life within the confines of inadequate times of destilation and confusion filled with endless apathy. i see your error but not mine here's the key i found while wandering so i posess the knowledge to set you free because i have the truth to release you from your shackles though i never would have found it If i hadn't lived outside the box Swift as a shadow, short as any dream; Brief as the lightning in the collied night, That in a spleen unfolds both heaven and earth, And ere a ma |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Hey, Great thoughts in this one! I like how it's written, nice job "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
It's always better to be an outsider! You do a great job of explaining this. Thanks for posting. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I liked this one alot. It was really good. Thanks for sharing it!!! People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. A little bit of a philosophical tone to it......wonderful! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. I really, really enjoyed this. The wording was great and I too liked the tone. Great piece of writing!!!! ~Carly A word is dead When it is said Some say, I say it just Begins to live That day. |
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