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Quagmire Friendship |
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Stephanya Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 63Berkshire County~USA~ |
*Quagmire Friendship* I think this might be Good bye, forever Because my friendship won't matter whatsoever I am out of your heart, now out of your eyes But to you it comes no surprise You have proved to me you never cared Since you were willing to be shared You only ignored me and put me down You made me look like such a clown You used me for my looks and money I was never really your little honey I put so much time and effort into you But you never appreciated what I would do I am very fragile and quite sensitive And the touch from you I needed just never is I let you into my heart Thinking we would never part Only in return I found who you really were And now all I want you to be is nothing, but a blur I have so much love to give And my whole life to live I just I hope I will be able to find Someone that won’t keep me in a bind Someone who won’t lure me in To another pathetic life full of sin I was only looking to be loved But instead I was just shoved Pushed away with no explanation So you could have a permanent vacation Here you go being selfish again Try to act your age, and stop being ten Face the facts of life for once Stop hiding behind the drug inside blunts One of these days you will understand When some girl won’t be willing to lend a helping hand You don’t deserve anything good Since I did all that I could You only took me for granted You never loved me, those words were just chanted I said I’d always be here for you But now I am not so sure I really want to What will you give me in return? Nothing that won’t leave me to burn You couldn’t even tell me the truth You have always lied through every single tooth I don’t even think you would be a good friend So whatever it is that we still have might just be coming to an end How can I believe if you are ever being real? Since you have never told me how you actually feel You would have to start talking Instead of running and walking If you want to stay close Give me some sort of dose The old stuff you had inside of you Those words that made me stick like glue Deep within this shattered heart I think I can pull out this painful dart We just might be able to see Us being friends like we always wanted it to be 2-25-2000 1:15 PM (:***stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well in the beginning you're prettu much condemning the whole fact that you got together with this guy, and then eventually state that your possible friendship might not even be worth it. I like the positive ending though. You basically portray to be this very forgiving person. I admire that. I hope the friendship prevails. Keep posting, it was a great read!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
It sounds like this guy really treated you bad, that's why I didn't like the feeling of giving him a second chance in the ending. But whatever  I think this was very well expressed, you really put some feeling into it. Good job, and I see this was written a while ago, so I'm just wondering how things worked out?"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
What kind of guy would do this to a girl???Whoever he is isnt worth your time...But if you are gonna let him do it over to you then its your own fault...Im not trying to be rude Im just stating my opinion...Cuz a girl I know is going through this with a close guy friend of mine...She lets him cheat then gets mad then takes him back and its her own fault... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Stephanya Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 63Berkshire County~USA~ |
Thanks everyone! Um...This was wrote back in February AFTER he cheate don me, and left me for someone else. We don't hang out as friends, but we do have mutual friends, therefore if we see each other, yes we WILL chit chat, but that's it. he was my foirst love so I can't help it. I would NEVER be with him ever again though. Ther otehr poem I wrote is about my new boy-friend who is a million times better. (:***stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." :: |
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