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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2000-11-01 06:09 PM

Mesh of Confusion:

Screw order

        Down with
                Con-
                   For-
                     Mist
            WaYs



            The goverment kills
                  freedom

Don't be
               AfRaId
                            to live

               KeEP your faith in
                  God and
Self
         Live on knowing you know
                  NOthINg

                          And Die Knowing You Go On
To Yet Another Plain Of
                          ThOuGhT

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

1 posted 2000-11-01 06:25 PM

Dopey_Dope
This is bad. Simple, but bad. I don't know if you're interested but on the Rage Against The Machine Official Site the have a forum for these types of poems, I think this would be very accepted there.
Keoni

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

2 posted 2000-11-01 08:26 PM

this isnt bad!!!its awesome...i like it alot Javier
Ina

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-11-02 03:07 PM

Hmmmmm, I guess I'm not seeing the bad part of this, I think it's a good poem.

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

4 posted 2000-11-02 03:10 PM

i dont think this is bad at all its kinda kool. i like the style a lot its kool and o ya this poem sucks! YEAH RIGHT!!!!!! lol remember that lol just getting u back

"put the name of the person u love, not in a heart because they alway break but put it in a circle which last forever"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2000-11-03 05:02 PM

I'd like to know what keoni meant by "bad". Anyway.......this poem was weirdly formatted but i like the format and will continue to do more of this in the future.
BUt anyway i'd like for keoni to elaborate on bad.

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Morouxshi San
Member

since 2000-10-11

Posts 207
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2000-11-03 11:03 PM

i think that this kind of poetry (i have no idea how its called) is underrated.
just as you see in some sites that poetry is mixed with imagery and some even require you to click through some pages in order to understand the whole sense of the poem is a new way of expressing one self. look at it as adding salad dressing to a salad, it only makes it better.
(note: i hate salad. i really hate it. i wish people will eat salad much more to see if we finally get rid of all of it.)

San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

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