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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
ALL MY LIFE IN HAVE LIVED IN LOVE, SEeaching for that on sent from above, Endless storys I am end, But I know I can count on chic to be my friend, She is one to make me laugh when I down, The way she looks at my would turn any froun upside down  ,She is the one you want to hold you tight, She is the one you dream of in day or night, She is that getntle wind that caress you just so, She is that fire that burns inside you that heal yo unlike the one below-(ouch)-, She is a angel of light that heals your soul She is the one of the best friends I have so only death would make me let her go, She is the one you wish you could kiss goodnight, She is everything to me so any one loving her treat her right, only warring   Love is pure in it's top form, But with out romance love is not born |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
this is for a dear friend something she can hold on to for along time or until I write something else about her dopey not to copy your somkeing face but looks cool yesno/.Love is pure in it's top form, But with out romance love is not born |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
"She is a angel of light that heals your soul" I thought this was a very nice poem  I wonder if she's going to read it??? Anyway, nice thoughts here."Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A wonderful tribute to your friend. Great job and i liked it. Oh and no prob about the face, it's not like i own it hehe.... "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. This was soo sweet, it's great that you've got such a neato friend... keep it up...ciao. ~Carly The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
That's incredibly sweet AND well written, I hope she reads this. Keep it up  Bel |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Thanks everybody lets just say I try to write a poem for her birthday it's a ways away but lets just say this is the only way I could let those feelings I had bottled up go so now I can be a great friend without any conflict. Love is pure in it's top form, But with out romance love is not born |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Well this would be perfect for her birthday...Good work!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
thanks Erin I was surprised that I wrote that expecally when me a my girlfriend broke-up so I'm single AGAIN  STAY CoOl PeOpLe Love is pure in it's top form, But with out romance love is not born |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
a perfect tribute to a perfect sister! My sister that is... Keep it up Jay!  ~*~SCG~*~ |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Thanks scg the next one you will enjoy, straight from the heart of a blood bought christian! Love is pure in it's top form, But with out romance love is not born |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Please wait while I wipe the tears from my eyes................................................................................................................................................................................ .................................................................................................................................................................................... ok I think that is all of them. Thanx for the poem jay, though I feel I don't deserve it, no one (except sis and someone else I won't mention, scg you know who it is,) has ever said anything like that to me (let alone write it) Thanx again big guy! "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
CHIC it was the only way I could ever really set my heart free it to just be honest it not like your really going to come back running in my arm so I figure I would just let it all out FINALLY so I figure that even though I can only kiss and hold you in my dreams in real life I could be a awsome friend your life because after you sis leaves out of the four of us it will just be us to that are still here  si I will still be here to hold you as a freind and to cheer you up so stay cool and remember crack kills Love is pure in it's top form, But with out romance love is not born |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
I know how you feel ( though you may not believe it) I really do. I feel terrible for what I did. And I truly don't know what to say. "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Chic I have gotten back into a good church and I have learned that we cannot suffer from what we did in the past, But learn from what happened because God had a hand in it belive it or not I belive that avery action I do has either a blessing or a conques but just remember who you are and by reading the poem you must realizr that you are important and not just to me to your sis and her hubby, TO your mom & dad even if he does have a hard expressing it. But now that you know that everyone look at you waiting for your decision, Will you go foward or will you turn you back, Because I know as well as you do when you want something you get it. I want to tell you this now I am planning to go into the national Guard around summer so I won't be around anymore if I make it in so IF you would like to say anything to me Better do it before summer! Love is pure in it's top form, But with out romance love is not born |
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