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No Boundaries For Love
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No Boundaries For Love |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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No Boundaries For Love: Such sweet conversational lust. Sweeping across life's floor. Rose pettles, and entrails of dust. A quivering shadow soar. Wispers from the land afar Come slowly into my ear. Shooting heart locked in a star. I'm in love with you, my dear.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Stephanya Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 63Berkshire County~USA~ |
Aaawwww...that was so sweet! As soon as I know for sure that I am in love with my boy-friend, this is definitely going to be part of the way I am going to tell him. Great Job!  (:***stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
I love this poem so much Javier!!!! it si SOOOOOO CUTE!!! i read it and said "aawwwwww" LOL! keep it up!!~*Justine*~ |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
you suprise me everyday my friend, I started thinking to myself dopey write love poems now this I have got to see, And but of course you protrade it well asusual hehe. Love is pure in it's top form, But with out romance love is not born |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Dopey, I like it, good job "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Dopey, I love you!!! That poem is so great. I can really relate to this poem! Don't wander throught this glassy surface, expecting to find more than me, because what I am without a purpose, but a lone mirage to see. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"Shooting heart locked in a star. I'm in love with you, my dear." This is a beautiful poem. I love the imagery. It's a short poem, but you've said it all. Thank you for sharing this with us. False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Short, sweet and straight to the point!!!Beautiful as always!!!Keep it up buddy... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
well someone's falling  i love this Dopes, I've always wondered if you could write one's about love and not hate  you know what i mean. thanks for the awesome readI see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Dopey- this is absolutely beautiful. such love expressed in so few words. wonderful... *smile*, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
thanks everybody!! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Rhiannon Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 95Fayetteville, TN USA |
Loved this one too! Wonderful poem. The night is my companion The solitude my guide Would I spend forever here And not be satisfied? Sarah MacLachlan, "Possession" |
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