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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC 
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You don't give a damn if I still care You don't even know if I'm still here You just want to play the games Gettin' numbers and takin' names You don't want it to be too much Don't want to be no one's crutch I just want to hold you in my arms While your pouring on all the charm I'll get too close, you'll turn on me Cause you'd rather just party You don't want the rules, they seem no fun The rules that come with loving someone You're giving up on the best thing Running away for some dumb fling This type of thing is hard to find It doesn't happen all the time I hope one day you'll miss my touch No one else will love you quite as much I hope you can live your life happily Maybe I'll come and see your family Who knows where you'll finally be But don't expect to turn and see me |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was nice. You still care but then you say it's like......"no...you wont see me...dont expect it......".....so it's like your moving on and stuff....or trying to convince yourself you are. I try to convince myself on a lot of things..... have fun. good post!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Well its good to hear that you arent gonna wait around...Good for you...If she really cared then she wouldnt do this to you...You made this very clear...Let her know how its going with you... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Erin, you are always so full of good advice. Actually I did tell her this, more or less. Things went bad 2 days ago. I told her that I loved her but that it wasn't enough. I said I had given her everything and she still wants more. I told her she could call me when she figured out what she wanted and how we could fix things. The end of that, for awhile... Keoni |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Well, I do think Erin already covered the advice, but you did a good job of expressing your feelings here, the poem is good  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It seems like I either follow Erin's or Lakewalker's replies. I too agree with Erin on this. I hate to say this, but she is right  keep up the good work and keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
This was an awesome poem keoni! I hope to see more! Curlz "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Acire~How could you say that you hate to say I am right??? Awww you are bogus...I see what kind of friend you are... Sorry keoni for taking up this space to say something to Acire... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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