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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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I guess I can explain this..no she hasn't passed away but I haven't talked to my mother over 3 years but I finally broke down and talked to her on the phone..I can't stand her for what she did..abandoning me saying she didn't love me and then showing no friggen remorse whatsoever for what she has done to me over the past 20 yrs..I'll forgive her in my own time..but I'd much rather get it out and done and over with and not have to let it bother me..it's not worth my time nor my effort and she'll never read this I won't give her the satisfaction...Unfortunately a mother is the source of unconditional love but I've never experienced that...sucks being torn between a step mother and your real mum..and life isn't supposed to be this heartbreaking nor stressful...but I've dealt with it well I'm proud of myself.. 10 Dec 00 You gave me life A heart to help me get thru countless lies Eyes to admire the stars up in the skies And words to help spellbind one's heart with my voice You also helped give me the breath in my lungs But most important of all you gave me unconditional love Through the years you have always been there Though at times I have been stubborn to admit it But I truly need it Now more than ever I need your touch or even your voice To help heal the pain inside I'm finally reaching out to you Your baby girl once more Crying in the middle of the night Wishing and praying that You could hold me once more I can't live without you in my life For you are my light And if I lost you again my heart would surely die.. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've touched my heart with these words Ceinwyn. It's such a difficult situation ... emotions torn, rebuilt ... trust lost, trying to rekindle. You do need to take things at your own pace, and know that although it may take some time, there is hope to rebuild and rekindle a new relationship. It sounds as if you are both making some efforts. Your words in this poem are lovely, and you've expressed your words so well. Keep writing of these emotions, as it's a great release ... even if you simply tuck them away in a safe place. Perhaps you can share them with her many years down the road. Take care, Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Hon, I'm so sorry that you have to go through this, but I can see that it's made you strong. You seem to have dealt with it very well. I wish only the very best for you. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow this was intense! The poem was so heart warming.......amazing. I loved it and wish you the best of luck.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
this was so touching... even the skies were crying outside my window, i hope alls well... great poem! jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This sounds really tough! You wrote a very good poem though, keep posting  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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