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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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I feel my life here is nothing, All i got to live for is you, This is how alone i am, What will happen when u are gone? Will that shiny little blade take a life of this wonderful guy? How alone i still feel, For ive got your love but not the love of the ppl who i want it from the most..........My Parents! Hello, this is kinda how i feel ya know when your parents are both usually working and gone and u have to watch your lil sis all day then when your mom gets home she does nothing but yells at u well thats my life hey guys i tryed to not write personally but i need to get this out "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Um...geez man....not sure what to say. The poem was pretty self-explaintory...I guess it's not meant like it seems aye? Okay well keep ur head up, maybe your rents will get over it  Bel |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. I hate this stuff, it just isn't fair..but we gotta live.. so good luck in living.. ~Carly The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yea what to say? Well i think the other two said what i woulda said in a nut shell. Live on buddy......you know you can do it.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I hope it's not truly reached such a difficult level for you Branden. Please talk to your parents if or when it does. These days, it's hard because in so many families, both parents do work. I'm sure they appreciate all of the help and support you give, especially helping with your sister. Sometimes even parents can forget to say thank you now and again through the chaos of everyday life. From the emotions I've read in your poems, you appear to be a wonderful young man with a caring heart. If you need to talk, please don't hesitate to e-mail me directly Branden. {{{Hugs}}} to you! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Branden, I hope things get better for you at home. It's perfectly all right that you've expressed your pesonal frustrations here, that's part of being human and it needs to be talked about. Nice job getting this out  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Hey thanks for all the reply's but trust me guys you say live no its not that easy when you feel your the only one that cares about you but hey i make it dont i? Yeah ive made it this far so im not gonna give up or even think of suicide or all that bullcrap i just needed to write to get all my frustration out thanks! "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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