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Baby I love You
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Baby I love You |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC 
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Lying awake but I'm dreaming And it's seeming That I might want to be a little more than friends From the first night that we spent together I've known that I want you forever Babe, this ain't no puppy love This is the stuff that dreams are made of I know I want you I need you Baby I love you I know love seems over rated But overtime, mine will not be faded This kind of love will get you high This kind of love will let you touch the sky Gently set you down on cloud number nine Never leaving as long as you're mine I wish I could turn back the hands of time So I could give you more reasons for you to be mine You're heart is locked up and the key should be given only to me And when you feel the turn of that key I'll be yours for eternity Set aside some special place So you can always remember my face Then I'll paint your picture in my mind So I'll have a photograph all the time You know this kind of love don't come easy But all you got to do is love me, to please me Cause I want you I need you Baby I love you All you have to do is notice me And your heart will be set free This kind of love can't last forever If you aren't willing to give me an answer Suddelties are you're specialty Especially when it comes to lovin' me If I can't tell a joke from a sign How will I know if you want to be mine In my mind I see your face In my heart I know your place You belong next to me Honey can't you see That I want you I need you Baby I love you I want you I need you Baby I love you |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Just bumping this hoping to get some feedback before I get dropped off the page. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
This is really good but why dont you give it to her...Or let her know how you are feeling...Dont keep it in...Or you might not have the chance to tell her!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
The cool thing is Erin, I did give it too her,I gave alot of them too her, they all went over good too... Until she met a new guy and did it again. Thanx Keoni |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Well then I dont know what to tell you...But if she keeps doing it to you its never gonna stop cuz you just keep going back... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. I just loved this! And as for your situation, all i can say is good luck...os yeah, good luck.... ~Carly The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great and just like chlid said......good luck with the situation!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This has some great "song" qualities to it Keoni ... much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I liked the flow of this, your words just seem to go together really well. Nice job on the poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This is such a sweet poem. It seems like you really love this gurl. This is such a sweet dedication. I liked this a lot =o) Good job! |
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