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jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

0 posted 2000-10-29 10:05 PM

So tiny, clever and unaware,
Of me you took care,
You always taught thee,
How and what to see,
From my first laces tied,
To whistling, how to abide,
You were always there for me,
And forever continue to be,
Your lessons meant well,
Inside my mind they dwell,
I never want to lose this,
Love coats my world bliss,
Words of thanks before you,
Gratitude for what you do,
Inside this head of mine,
These feelings lurk of thine,
You cared and gave me praise,
And made roads through this maze,

And I owe you
For everything...

Sincerely,
Jeremy Raulinaitis

10/29/00

"...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-10-30 06:27 AM

Oh Jeremy ... this is so incredibly sweet and thoughtful. Beautiful sentiments in tribute to a woman who has touched your heart so, just lovely!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-10-30 08:28 PM

Jeremy, this is such a nice poem for your Grandma! Very nicely done here

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-10-30 08:28 PM

This was a wonderful tribute to your loving grandmother. I liked the poem a lot keep it up!

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

jeremydraul
Senior Member

since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

4 posted 2000-10-31 09:16 PM

thanks, my family is going through a crisis so Im thinkin about giving it to her so she doesnt feel unloved

"...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~

Erin
Member Elite

since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

5 posted 2000-11-01 10:25 PM

Jeremy~
This is beautiful...And I think that you should give it to her...She sounds like she is really special to her...Show her how special she is!!!

~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

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