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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
I am Lindsay I am 14 I am green-eyed I am 5'6" I am lonely I am scared I am terrified I am in pain I am thinking I am scaring myself I am frightened of things I am frightened of the future I am wondering what it is like I am worried about what it has to come I am scared of it I am not wanting the future I am scared for my dad I am worried about my mom I am stressed I am worried about school I am almost never happy I am crying I am crying too much to be happy I am happy by the little things I am scared "i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky" enrique iglesias |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. We've all felt all this...maybe not at all the same time...well keep your chin up and keep writing...this was great.. ~Carly The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well..........we are all scared of a lot of things. I am Javier I am 17 I am scared of dogs I am crying due to heart break I am dying due to loneliness I am happy because I lie I lie because i'm sad And oh well!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
I am too in pain I am scared for dad I am stressed and worried I am your best friend I am here Yeah, so what mine's corney but who cares right?? It's a great poem, I TOTALLY know how you feel! SMILE Bel |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
well, i wish i could help, i really do, if i can jus say so k? geez theres soo much feeling in this, eventhough it looks so plain, very well written!! kee your hopes up! clb let the fighting words lie let the candle light die let the sun come up let the same imply ~EvE 6 |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
 thanks for replying guys! Curlz "i've kissed the moon a million times, danced with the angels in the sky" enrique iglesias |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I am tired I am tired I am tired I am tired I am tired I am not looking forwrd to getting up early to retake my ACT's! Eeeeeek! Nicely done poem, it seems very personal, I like it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I am the real slim shady I am what everyone says I am I am tiger woods Yes, I am (the old bud commercial, remember?) Sorry, Had to throw that in to get a smile outta you  seriously, I am open I am caring always I am willing to listen I am offering my services I am here whenever you wanna talk or let things out keep ya head up..you're only 14 Lindsay, too young to waste a life into sadness. There is so much out there. I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Lindsay~ You are so young but you are so worried about so much...Dont waste life worrying so much...Live it to the fullest!!!We all can relate to some of this...And I dont worry about stuff like this...I live my life slowly so I get more out of it before I go... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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