Teen Poetry #3 |
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My wall......My Life |
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CrazyPrincessAngelDevil Junior Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 36Fitchburg, Ma, Usa |
My wall looks so scary and yet far away It looks like everything comes and goes I cannot climb the wall of life It looks so high and so scary and sad Do I dare move or shall I stay here No I'll move and see what's up there Oh no! Spasm I scream Love enters and it's great and I'm scared This guy is so nice and understanding Yet do I trust him? No I don't I lose it Love enters again this time I'm happy I'm loving it Death arives at my face With my dad he's face 2 face with death He must be scared He's not He dies 12-23-99 I know if I give up on life now I won't see the rest and how is it going to end up I am stronger than anyone thinks People think I am weak I ignore them I don't talk to them I walk away I am never giving up in life If I do I'll stop myself or try to Thats the wall of life ~CPAD~ ![]() If you fail, don't give up you'll never know whats going to happen. You can't find me for love, nor can you have me for love, you can love me for who I am. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey well nice thoughts, i loved the poem. Never give up....and when you do, just come to us at passions and i know i'd be more than glad than to help you out. ![]() ![]() "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
"Do I dare move or shall I stay here No I'll move and see what's up there" Even though this talks about some tough things you still has a positive attitude, that's really great. The poem is very good, thank you for sharing it, and I like the advice to never give up! ![]() "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I love the message you are trying to tell everyone in this poem. Thanks so much for sharing it. Awesome write and keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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