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the days go by |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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The days go by. The days go by and I wonder why, Just why each and everyday someone good has to pass away, Its all a little confusing to this head of mine. The days go by and I wonder why, I need to be here each and everyday, The days pass by I dont wanna be here. The days pass by and someone close to me always dies, The days pass by and still I wonder why, The days pass by and I love my girlfriend more then ever. The days pass by and I wanna be with her forever, The days pass by and I begin to pray for everything, The days pass by and someday it will be my time. The days pass by and there will be another kid sitting here thinking the same time, When its my time to go the last day will finally pass by for me. "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I enjoyed your thoughts and ponderings in this Branden. Sometimes it does feel like the days just fly by. When I'm feeling like this, I like to think about just one thing each day that simply made me smile. Nothing earth shattering, just a little happiness where the clock slowed enough to enjoy that little smile. Take care, Best wishes, /Kit |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Well hey thanks for the reply and i get where your coming from a lot "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This are some great thoughts. True, time flys on swift wings, and before we know it, we have arrived at our final day. Kit gives some very good advice, enjoy it while you can!  False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This one really made me think...but i've touched upon these subjects before. I often wonder some of these things too. It was a great poem tho...=o) The days go by and I wonder why, I need to be here each and everyday, The days pass by I dont wanna be here. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
THis was great branden, Nice thoughts buddy. And so you have a pic of yourself up there? Yea, i've been meaning to put one of me, but i think i'd frighten half of the people who see it. The other half would faint.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Branden- I like how you repeated "The days pass by". It made the statement seems so true. nicely done poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Hey guys guess what the days pass by and My life goes high and higer... i have to thank you all you have opened a door for me to enter with wall these great remarks and when i started putting my work on here well ive also been sending it out trying to see if n e one is intrested in publishing a few and well i have got somewhere and i am very glad so as soon as i find out ill let u guys know whats up.......THANK U ALL "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. I've thought all of this before..grat job putting it into words buddy!! I really enjoy all your stuff. Keep writing.. ~Carly The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of. |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
wow branden this was really good. i really enjoyed this because you are so good at expressing urself. great poem! Curlz "I feel fine enough I guess considering everything's a mess" Barenaked Ladies |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Hey hey im here and im in the greatest mood yeah uh huh i am and guess what im thanking u all for replying to all my poems it seems a lot of you guys really like them which is why i am gonna post them on a website of my own and let all others see just not ppl on the forums.......I LOVE YOU ALL (check for another poem here within a few hours) "what doesnt kill you only makes you stronger" |
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