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My Mistake
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My Mistake |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA 
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My Mistake You’re ruining my life And you don’t even know it I have had feelings for you a long time But too afraid to really show it Too afraid to put myself out there Too afraid let you know how I feel Too afraid to feel pain I thought would never heal But now I see The mistake I’ve made To go back and fix it Almost anything I’d trade But it’s too late You’ve found someone new And all I can do Is stand here all alone, waiting for you I didn’t listen to my heart Now I’ve lost you I have only myself to blame I don’t know what to do Now I sit here about to cry I feel my heart break Tears come streaming from my eyes As I think of my mistake < !signature--> ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 10-25-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow well you're pretty sad eh? I don't know what to say cept i hope things get well. Keep that head up.  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. This was really well written..Just remember, life really DOES go on, specially for us teenage people...just don't lock yourself in a little box. ~Carly The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Love can be really harsh, but don't linger on the past. Like Child said, life goes on. You'll find someone who deserves you!  Anyway, this is a great poem. Keep up the good work!False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
OMG that is soooooooo sad!!! And what is even sadder is that I so know what you are going through I am sure everyone does!!! Don't be afraid to show your feelings to meanie boy aka aj later when the time has come for them to part!!! Just don't be afraid or I will have to do it this time!!! |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Having to get over someone is the worst mainly if you have strong feelings for them...Why dont you tell this guy how you feel...You never know whats going on in his head about you...Its worth the try...Cuz you may never have that chance again... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
thanx for the replies everyone, they were much appreciated. Much Luv, Priscilla ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Okay, I don't have much advice for you. I've read this a couple times...and I'm not really sure what to tell you. All I can think of is to follow your heart...or your gut instinct, I guess which ever had been best in the past. Good luck and keep your chin up, great poem! Smile! Bel |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I'm bad with advice, so I won't even go there. But this poem is very very good!! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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CrazyPrincessAngelDevil Junior Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 36Fitchburg, Ma, Usa |
That's a good poem, all good . ~CPAD~  |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
thank you to everyone who replied to my poem, it means a lot to me!! ~*~ YeStErDaY iS tHe PaSt, 2mOrRoW iS ThE fUtUrE, ToDaY iS a GiFt, ThAt'S wHy We CaLl iT ThE pReSeNt. ~*~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Hey girl, don't be so harsh on yourself. Maybe at that time, you really weren't ready. Just because you don't have him now doesn't mean that you made the wrong decision then. You know what I mean? Keep your head up, okay? I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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