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Suteki
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since 2000-10-23

Posts 5

0 posted 2000-10-29 01:01 AM

-Eternity...-

And if I don't live to see another day
Then I'm glad I knew you
And if we do meet again
Let my smile stay with you always

Friends come and go, we all know that
But rarely in life does one find one like you
You've always been by my side
Seeing me through to the light

And although times change
Leaving us back in the past
No matter what happens you're still here
In my heart and memories

Don't let me stay here forever alone
Hear my voice calling for you
Take my hand and let us go together
No longer shall we have to be

Forever young in eternity...

[This message has been edited by Suteki (edited 10-29-2000).]

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-10-29 08:43 AM

Lovely sentiments in this tender piece Suteki ... very nicely done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-10-29 01:24 PM

This was very nice, I loved the last statement in the poem. It was a great read!

"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-10-29 01:26 PM

"And if I don't live to see another day
Then I'm glad I knew you"

I really like how you began this, and the whole poem is good. The feeling behind it sounds sincere. Nice work

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

Child of the Stars

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since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

4 posted 2000-10-29 04:22 PM

Hey. This was really great stuff, the ending just brought all the good thoughts together. Well done, well done.

~Carly

The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of.

Slim
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since 2000-07-19

Posts 49
Kentucky, USA

5 posted 2000-10-29 09:42 PM

luved this poem!!

"But rarely in life does one find one like you"

it reminds me of a special someone i know personally. very nicely done.

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