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Falling Again |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA 
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~!*Falling Again*!~ When my heart had given-up, and living each day became a chore. When nothing made me happy, and my soul was weak and sore. Then the day came, when you walked into my heart. I wanted to keep you forever, and from you id never part. You brought back the smile to my face, and the sparkle to my eye. You made me enjoy each day im living, and i'll treasure that lesson till the day i die. You make me feel things, I thought I never again could feel. You gave me hope for the future, and showed me a love thats real. Thank you for loving me, you've changed me in so many ways. And i hope this feeling, what we have together; forever stays. **Dedicated to RMH [This message has been edited by DancinQueen (edited 10-24-2000).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Whoever you wrote this too must be really special because it is so good!! I liked the poem, espescially this part  "You gave me hope for the future, and showed me a love thats real." "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Wow this is wonderful! GREAT work! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Hey Sweets!!! Haven't seen you around in a while. Thanks for bumping my poems though i thought those were my bad ones. Hey, glad to hear this is happening in your life. I did kinda have an idea though. I was thinking, why hasn't Kiley been online? One thing stuck out in my mind, maybe them two are getting to spending time with each other a lot more, which gives her less time for being online. Glad for ya, i guess i was right. he he he.....any gossip at all? by the way, bad news...i've decided not to go to the concert. the line up is week this year for the holloween bash. they only have christina aguilera, kandi, pink, mikaila, ruff endz, r kelly.....Me, and my friends decided not to waste our time...I guess my tickets are wasted too..floor seats row 5..that's ok, ill try to scalp em....uh, sell i mean  2 more days sweets  don't think i've forgotten i'll get you something else, i'll figure something out, i promise I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Awwwwww acire loves you hehe. naaa but anyway good poem. Keep it up!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Yeah... this poem is very sweet. I'm happy for you. Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Hey Dopey, don't be starting rumors...... lol...man....this is sooooo funny I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Lakewalker~~>yes they are VERY special Suga_Baby~~> hey! thanks so much for replying acire~~> hey sweetie! u love me? LOL where in the heck did he get that from? but i'll mail ya about everything so i dont get carried away here! bye babe! Dopey~~>u know, ure comments always brighten my day thanks!"One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
just bumping because a few important people havent read this yet..ahem..ERIN ~*DQ*~ "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
Am I an important person? i hope so, anyways, enough about me, more about you cuz this poem rocks! i love the flow and rhythm, it goes real nice with what your conveying, theres a lot of good lines but i loved these: "Then the day came, when you walked into my heart. I wanted to keep you forever, and from you id never part." My congrats to you on such a good-hearted peice! jeremy r "...if you've never met me, then you've no right to judge me. I have a good heart, but this heart can get ugly." ~DMX~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I made it girl!!!Dont think I forgot about you cuz here I am...To save the day!!!LOL Sorry it took so long...I have been working my butt off...But I am now back...I knew someone would miss me...LOL This is such a sweet poem...And it sounds like this guy is a really good one too!!!Keep me posted on what goes on with this...OK??? Well it sounds like you are in love...Uh ohh did I say that word...Are you in love girl!?!?!Well just make the best of it...And dont fall to hard...Let the guy do the falling...Sounds good to me how about you... P.S.~This one is going in my library... ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You know.....it's good Erin got to the poem cuz then i woulda had to break into her account......and impersonate her. *tries to be erin* "you go girl!!!" ok anyway.... hahahaha im lame. Yea again this was great....arf arf who let the dogs out?!?! Hey ummm....what was i gonna say?....damn i posted this up for a reason.....oH YEA!!! hehehe i type while i think...odd eh? Anyway nobody replies to my new poems anymore *cries* I even posted up one of my fav styles......*coughs* REVERSAL.....yea check that one out.......*coughs* REVERSAL..yea.. anyway good poem bye bye! "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Hey this was great!! It's sooooo sweet!! Did you show this to him....I think he'd like it. I'm so glad you've got someone like that, good luck to you both, keep it up Bel |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
LOL Dopey you are too funny...And I think Acire and DQ are in love...Awwww whats going on you 2??? LOL  ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Erin - just because I'm being sweet to her, it doesn't mean something is going on. What's this, you and Dopey are ganging up on me now? I say sweet words to you too, and to Jessica...... I just can't help but laugh, this is really funny Just don't take it too far  DQ - Hey sweets, maybe i should just stop calling you that...hmmmm...Just hopin these Passions Joan Rivers wanna be don't bother you. This is so funny...no offense to you Kiley Are we an item now? lol j/k sorry, i just had to throw that in don't get mad ok? later sweets Hey Erin, later too sweetness - there you go am I in love with you too? ha!!!  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Acire~ Since when do you love a psycho??? LOL Yep thats me...Dont you remember??? ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
WOW! LOL i hadnt checked this poe for awhile..boy did i miss some good stuff! ERIN~> hey girlie! bout time you read this lol jk! whoa noooo lol acire and i are not an "item" i have someone else in my life at the moment, hes just being a good friend Dopey~~> lol u crack me up, and i'll be usre to go reply to your poem ASAP acire~~>u soo better not quit calling me that! thats my favorite nickname! and btw..the concert was awesome, but no basketage passes  oh well! just an announcement...IM 16 NOW!!! <3 ya'll! Kiley* "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
OmG i absolutely loved this poem. I definately understand how you feel and when i understand a poem and have gone through that same experience i really get into it. Your poem expressed so much that i've experienced..you put it in great words! Excellent job!! |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
WOW this is sooooooo sweet! this guy must be really special to you! I really loved this poem great job! Curlz "I feel fine enough I guess considering everything's a mess" Barenaked Ladies |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
aww! thanks guys so much for replying! means alot when i write something that comes from the heart, and im glad so many of you can relate to this because its a wonderful thing to experience <3 always~ *Kiley "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Kiles...don't worry, you're always be sweets, though i gave you and Jessica the same nickname though....let me see what I can do about that...hmmmmm I'll think of something.....you'll keep that and I'l start calling her Pryncess...I sometimes do anywaysErin is jealous cause I call her *Weirdo* I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
This is so AWESOME!!!!!!! you have no idea how uch i loved this poem! great work!!!!!! ~*Pixie*~ |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
acire~~> good cause i like that nickname and ERIN i still luv ya Pixie~>im glad you liked it so much "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
bumping* theres a couple Jeremy's out there that havent got to it "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Acire~ I am no where near being jealous...I have my boyfriend to sweet talk me...LOL ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
hey ERIN i just wanted to say i like your quote lol your signature..or whatever they call that thing...ya know what imn talkin about! "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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CrazyPrincessAngelDevil Junior Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 36Fitchburg, Ma, Usa |
Good Poem, ~CPAD~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hey Erin, go paint your nails lol j/kKiley sweets -- no problem I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
CPAD~~> thanks for replying, im glad you liked it acire~~> LOL ok we're using my poem replies as a chatroom... "One fine day you'll look at me and know that love was meant to be" ~Carol King |
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