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I Poured out my Heart, here
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I Poured out my Heart, here |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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~*~ I Only Want You to Be Happy ~*~ < !signature-->Last night I had a nightmare You and her together Holding each other Loving each other Without a care That I’m crying In the corner You seemed so happy Much happier Than with me That makes me wonder if I’m the one You should be with. I woke up And the tears fell I want us to work And the dream to be wrong I want you to look At me like you did her In my horrible dream I only want you to be happy Ill do whatever It takes to make you happy Whether its forever Or Goodbye I only want you to be happy No matter how bad It hurts me I only care for you I mean nothing to myself I know you love me But my mind wonders In my sleep ~*~ Whispered Love ~*~ When we first met, I didn’t expect to fall I knew you were different From the guys I’ve dated Tyme went on And I fell in love There were so many tymes I whispered to myself “God I love you” You never knew You never saw me Want to cry Because I thought I’d never have The chance to show you Just how much I care I never thought I’d get to hold you I didn’t expect to Feel your lips on mine I never knew you felt The same way. ~*~ So Far ~*~ Last year when I saw you, I didn’t know what to think. I started liking you, But summer was coming. Id forgotten of you, Until the next moment. You popped back in my life, We didn’t speak a word. A day or two later, School was back in session. Day by day, we grew close, One day, I lost it all. Every day that we spoke, I grew closer to you. The day he broke it off, I cried on your shoulder. As much as I liked you, I wasn’t expecting To move on so quickly, But I knew it was you. That was 6 weeks ago, Things have gone good so far. I hope we continue, Just the way we have been. If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 10-29-2000).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Hey Tamma...these were all very good poems. The first one i can relate to a lot. I often feel that way about my best guy friend. All you want is for them to be happy but you end up hurting yourself in the end or in the process. The 2nd one i can relate to too. But i, like you, ended up getting that chance to feel their lips against mine. But what your poem states...i've felt for months before it actually happened. Great job hun...keep on writing. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey tamma these 3 were great, but why don't you put them in 3 seperate topics? You'd get more posts like that, and more replies. Just a tip.... Thanks for sharring!  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
All three of these are really good. I like the style this are in, with very short lines. Dreams are not always what we want them to be, isn't that just annoying!  I hope everything stays good with you two, and good job on these poems."Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Thank all 3 of you for replying...i have totally poured my hear out, here...im only waiting to see Justin's reaction when he reads ~*~ I only want you to be happy ~*~ well, thanx again Tamma If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. These were great, all were well written and very heartfelt. That sounded more like a haunting nightmare to me... well keep up the great writing!! ~Carly The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of. |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Thanx for the reply Carly things are gettin better by the moment, but the sad thing is that I'm leaving Thursday at 8 am. until Saturday around 8 pm...boy, am i gonna miss him!!!If you love someone dont put their name in a heart, put their name in a circle, because a heart can be broken but a circle is continious. |
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