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My Angel |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Hey! I hope you enjoy my poem but before you read it i have to let you know that the whole concept is that he isn't here, so just keep that in mind  My Angel You are my angel The one that I love The one person i dedicate my love to You are that one that I feel so comfortable with You make me so happy My angel that sneaks into my dreams at night The one that fills my head with sweet thoughts You swept me off my feet the first time i saw you Your charm appealed to me And you just stood out in such a way When I look at you I tingle I get butterflies just thinking about you I love that you love me too I love everything about you Your smile brightens my day Makes all my troubles seem so simple You are my angel and I love you My angel, when will you come? "I feel fine enough I guess considering everything's a mess" Barenaked Ladies |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. This was so sweet, I wish I had an angel to long for as you do... ~Carly The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job, Sorry to hear he's not here. Keep that head up  "I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust." I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Slim Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 49Kentucky, USA |
"Your charm appealed to me And you just stood out in such a way...." it really makes me think about how sumtimes you find without having to look. i really enjoyed this poem, and i hope that special angel comes your way someday! Slim |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is a very sweet poem! I like it a lot, but I'm sorry you don't have him with you right now. Nicely done poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Your angel will someday be with you. Just don't be in such a hurry. keep it up and keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Dont be in such a rush to find your angel...One day he is gonna come and sweep you off your feet...And you are gonna want to remember that forever...Sweet poem too!!! ~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~ |
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