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curlygurly
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0 posted 2000-10-27 07:24 PM


Hey! I hope you enjoy my poem but before you read it i have to let you know that the whole concept is that he isn't here, so just keep that in mind  

My Angel

You are my angel
The one that I love
The one person i dedicate my love to
You are that one that I feel so comfortable with
You make me so happy
My angel that sneaks into my dreams at night
The one that fills my head with sweet thoughts
You swept me off my feet the first time i saw you
Your charm appealed to me
And you just stood out in such a way
When I look at you I tingle
I get butterflies just thinking about you
I love that you love me too
I love everything about you
Your smile brightens my day
Makes all my troubles seem so simple
You are my angel and I love you
My angel, when will you come?


"I feel fine enough I guess
considering everything's a mess"
Barenaked Ladies



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1 posted 2000-10-27 08:33 PM



  Hey. This was so sweet, I wish I had an angel to long for as you do...

  ~Carly

The grindstone of life will either polish us or wear us down, depending on what we're made of.


Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2000-10-27 08:37 PM


Great job, Sorry to hear he's not here. Keep that head up


"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Slim
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 49
Kentucky, USA
3 posted 2000-10-27 08:43 PM


"Your charm appealed to me
And you just stood out in such a way...."

it really makes me think about how sumtimes you find without having to look. i really enjoyed this poem, and i hope that special angel comes your way someday!  

Slim

Lakewalker
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4 posted 2000-10-28 03:42 PM


This is a very sweet poem!  I like it a lot, but I'm sorry you don't have him with you right now.  Nicely done poem

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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5 posted 2000-10-29 07:27 PM


Your angel will someday be with you.  Just don't be in such a hurry.  keep it up and keep sharing

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Erin
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since 2000-06-15
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6 posted 2000-11-01 11:05 PM


Dont be in such a rush to find your angel...One day he is gonna come and sweep you off your feet...And you are gonna want to remember that forever...Sweet poem too!!!


~*Love is sometimes like a rose. Beautiful in the beginning but dies in the end.*~

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